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Blood and Stars. - Part 2.

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By Skittles_PuNk Send DollMail
Created: 2008-04-09 15:57:53 All stories by Skittles_PuNk
I woke up,

the air around me was difficult to breathe in,

like my very lungs rejected the foul scent that was choking me.

I sat up, and rubbed around my eyes, as I did, bits of congealed blood crumbled off onto the stone floor.

'Where IS this place?' I wondered aloud, it was dark, but there was a musty window that I could just about see through.

Two figures were standing outside, their heads close together.

A girl with blood red hair in a bun with strands falling out, and a man with the same hair, and the same TEETH.

They both had HUGE TEETH, sharp and pointed.

I wondered where I was, some kind of cell perhaps?, a PRISON?

I thought that it was maybe good that I had no idea where I was, otherwise I would panic, and sent my head spiralling into blackness, and trust me, it is NOT an experience I wanted to repeat.

Then I realised I was wearing a dress, black, with red hemming and detail.

And I also wore black boots, and lacy tights that itched a lot.

I heard a rustling, I screamed, thinking the vampiric man was back, wanting more of my precious blood, he had got the taste and tracked me down.....

I began to shiver violently, and I felt numb.

The rustle sounded like the beating of thousands...

and thousands of....

WINGS.

BATS< and lots of them, rushed towards me,

I screamed and they flapped relentlessly round my face, feeling like it was an eclipse,

barring the world from my vision, I thrashed out at the bats, hitting one or two each time,

knocking them off balance, so they had to right themselves,

but there was too many,

I saw the glint of fangs,

NO, THEY MUST BE VAMPIRE BATS I thought in terror,

AND THEY WANT TO KILL ME,

LIKE THE MAN IN THE STREET,

I screamed again,

long and loud,

like a tortured animal,

I screamed so loud,

the world felt like it stood still,

then I saw the fangs flash white again in the sea of black beating wings,

I saw them closer..

closer.......

and felt an odd sensation,

I realised that horrible vampire man had hold of my neck with his scabby fingernails.

@GERROFF!!!!!!' I screamed, lashing out at him,

but he clutched my neck tighter, and put his other hand in my hair,

tangling it in his ghoulish fist,

pulling it painfully upwards so I was forced to look at his face,

he smiled at me again,

nastily,

and said to me,

'this will hurt you a lot more than it will hurt me, now just lay still, or you may rip an artery'.

I stopped thrashing around and heard what he said,

the bats were all still whooshing around us,

nobody was there to help,

I NEEDED HELP,

but felt a harsh injecting pain,

like a syringe being inserted in to my neck,

it was so gruesome, I could feel my blood being sucked out.

I I threw up,

vomiting violently, but he still gripped my hair tightly,

until I shakily shuddered to the floor,

no longer caring what happened.
  

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Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 11, 2008
X_crazy_x_kid_

18/Female
Charlevoix, MI
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Posted On: April 10, 2008
*shivers*

that was CREEPY!

but the kind of creepy you just can't get enough of!

plz keeps me's posteds!

~crazykid ^-^
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 10, 2008
thanks you guys ^___^

and pinkshine, I will try to write clearer next time, it even annoys ME to read this without paragraphs xD
rocky095

22/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: April 10, 2008
luv it! keep me posted!

-stef
snowbrat74

18/Female
Staten Island, NY
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
omg... that was amazingg!!
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
Talking about grammatical errors...

I meant into my computer screen...
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
Ooh! You gave me double the chills! But FYI just for the sake of grammatical advice, I don't think you should write every line skiping in between then it looks more like a poem, try paragraphs, otherwise it made my eyes blare right inot my computer screen!

--CrAzY--ShArOn--
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