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Hi, my name is Isabella Cullen
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Blood and Stars. - Part 1.

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Story Rating   4.63  with 8 vote(s)
By Skittles_PuNk Send DollMail
Created: 2008-04-08 16:09:17 All stories by Skittles_PuNk
*rustle*

*rustle*

The wind rustled through the trees, cold, it swept the dead leaves off the ground, then let them flutter back down to the ground.

I shivered, you couldn't tell if there was anybody around, the shadows played tricks on your eyes, one minute you see them, then you don't.

I was foolish, out here in the street, I looked at my watch, 10 pm, and counting.

foolish, foolish, foolish......

The word echoed in my head, my mind twisting it until it made no sense, not a part of the human language anymore.

A twig snapped, my skin prickled, I kept my head down and walked faster.

The trees all looked menacing, every shadow posed a nameless treat, I hurried faster, faster, my heart punding, hurting, the wind hauled through my ears, I fought back a scream as I felt fingers on my shoulder.

I tried to yell but a hand clamped over my mouth, a hand with long fingernails and white flesh, I struggled but another hand was round my waist, and I was throw carelessly back into the bushes.

I crashed through the thorns, yelling loudly, screaming, in pain and terror,

HELP ME, HELP ME I screamed,

The moonlight shone suddenly bright and flashed onto a face.

a smirking, white face with slender narrow grey eyes, bottomless eyes, hair as red as the blood seeping through my clothes, but as I looked at him, he smiled, revealing two sharp canines, and it looked more like he was baring his teeth rather than smiling.

I gasped and tried to scream again,

but he lunged at me, too fast and I was pushed back down on to the floor, his eyes rushed into mine and met breifly, before I was laying on the ground,

My head was forced upwards, I saw the stars,

beautiful, but they twinkled sinisterly at me, a warning,

then I felt a pain on my neck,

I screamed, but it came out garled and distorted,

I saw his face,

looking evilly at me,

a quick evil smile flitted towards me,

I saw the blood trickle from my neck injury to my eyes,

blurring the stars,

making them blood red,

Blood and stars, the last thing I saw before I blacked out.

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THAT was THE MOST crappy thing ever.

T___T

but I HAD to start a vampire story ^__^
  

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bribri963

76/Female

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Posted On: November 21, 2008
Thx for those rude comments.. anyways im not going to read your story i read twilight and saw the first show of it in the theaters so i know everything about it.
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 3, 2008
hi im writ9ing this from da skool libraery
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
no scytheeee

I have NOT readeth Twilight yet.

I just stole edwards last name and bellas first name for a character.

lalahaha
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
THANYOU GUYS
Scythe

103/Female

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Posted On: April 9, 2008
YOU READ TWILIGHT!?!?!?!

AND YOU DIDN'T TELL US YOU CONVERTED TO TWILIGHTISM?

± Scythe
Tragic_Survivo

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
wow!! youhh rock!!
X_crazy_x_kid_

18/Female
Charlevoix, MI
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
very good!

plz keep me posted!

yay!!!

~crazykid

(P.S.-vampire stories are the BEST!)
SILLYx_LoveSon

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
Me likey.

Keep me updated, this could totally go somewhere. When I read the doll name I was thinking that it was maybe Bella after she was turned into a vampire. But I'm glad it isn't.

Good work.

=]

Keara
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
ohh the LOVE.

I am on most popular

*sings random Sound Of Music song very loudly*
lil_emo

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
It's actually good.

Marina xxx
Skittles_PuNk

103/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
I will read Twilight I am getting it for my b-day which is the 24th of April.

I just heard Isabella, and 'the cullen family'

and I stole the names xD

thanks for the criticism and support, I like people to read my stories, no matter HOW crappy they are!!!!!!
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
babertape4576, It's ECLIPSE. Not ECLIPLES. XDD

‡ Horrors
Horrors

105/Male
Broken Arrow, OK
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Posted On: April 9, 2008
fanfiction...Skittles-chan is writing fanfiction...I think. O__O

HIGH FIVES FOR FANFICTIONERS!

Suga2suga urusai. It twasn't crappy. If you think so let's see you write it better. -.-

‡ Horrors
babertape4576

32/Female
Worthing, SD
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Posted On: April 8, 2008
Have your read Twiligt, New Moon, or Ecliples?
rocky095

22/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: April 8, 2008
its not that bad!!

but keep me updated !

-stef
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