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Hi, my name is Scythe
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Blackbirds

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By Scythe Send DollMail
Created: 2009-09-20 22:32:56 All stories by Scythe
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I still dream of that place

Every night and every day

I spend my time in memories

We weren't always this way

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I tried to steal you back

In a game of let's-pretend

I still dream of that place

With staircases that never end



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I miss the way you used to be

Please, on the count of three

I'll close my eyes and open them

And you will be naive



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I still dream of that place

Every night and every day

When did that place disappear?

Now we waste away



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Two little blackbirds sitting on a hill

One named Jack and one named Jill

Fly away Jack, fly away Jill

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One bad day just like a bitter pill

Locked inside my mind and screaming very still

Come back Jack, come back Jill



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Member Comments  
cutie_pie6

16/Female
Elmendorf Afb, AK
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Posted On: September 21, 2009
this poem is awesome i love it
Leaf

16/Female
Canada
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Posted On: September 21, 2009
That was inspiring. There's just one problem.

I CAN'T WRITE LIKE THIS.

luvieness

21/Female
Zimbabwe
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Posted On: September 20, 2009
You know what?

I think I luvvles it. ♥

You don't try too hard to rhyme [at least, it doesn't seem that way] and the meaning is clear and beautiful. Bravo ^_^

-Luvie ♥
Sweet_Venom

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: September 20, 2009
I like this poem. =]

--RINA
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