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Atrocious Reveries

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Story Rating   4.43  with 14 vote(s)
By pinkshine05 Send DollMail
Created: 2008-10-05 12:10:15 All stories by pinkshine05
Atrocious Reveries



Screams of repugnance

Running into a sightless alley

Minds full of void

Breathless panting

Turnings of the dead

Frets of the unidentified

A vague notion of partial blurs

An unfathomable, sinister venture

Throughout the ominous, menace

Aligned with the tombstones

For as of the seeking from the reveries

Deliberate motion of the intimidation

Running, running into the eccentric

Nonentity…

Earsplitting blares as the awoken approaches

It’s not just a nightmare…

Its awfulness

Its petrified abhorrence

Its taunts you until, you’re nothing but the flesh

Cries for help

Nevertheless no one will arrive, perceptibly…

When you have a nightmare it’s a sensation of reality



Blank intentions

There’s nothing left,

However the anxious feeling tranquil blotches resist

Nightmares of the dead

Nightmares of the scared souls

The chasing of the dread

Atrocious Reveries



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A/N: Hoped you guys liked my poem. It was describing the nightmare I had last night after watching a horror movie. I woke up with tears and a scream...it was akward but happens to everyone at least once right?

Well, it sure was one hell of a dream...

© Crazy Lee
  

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Smiles_sunnie

20/Female
VA
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Posted On: January 7, 2009
You amaze me and your writing D=

You make the Green Monster come out in me.
Sharmy06

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 12, 2008
u go girl that was an awsome poem!!!
Biscut21

19/Female
Justin, TX
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Posted On: October 6, 2008
This was really good!

Keep me posted girly!!!

Luve always

Robyn Lee
CaRrOt

19/Female
Abraham, WV
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Posted On: October 6, 2008
I like this. It's not something you read everyday. It's really great!

I remember the first time we met was over a story because you wanted one of my special-one-of-a-kind comments.

Remember that?

Wait,was that someone else?

Never mind.

XD

Great poem! I love it. Anytime you write something new (poem,story or other) send me the link ASAP or go crawl in a ditch and die.

Rawr,

[[=Carrot Lee=]]

PS: Have a nice day!
Rocketship_

103/Female
Japan
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
Oh, the words...

SUCH BEAUTIFUL ADJECTIVES!

-cries out of pure love for adjectives-

I love you.

....

O.O

So unescapably well-worded. FOOD TO THE SOUL, I SAY!

-cough- Five stars. -cough-
ResonantThunde

20/Female
Australia
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
HolyshiitIthinkIjustcrappedmypants

O.O

That was absolutely amazing. And terrifying.

--Thunder--
pinkshine05

19/Female
Canada
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
Woah...thanksies guys! -Huggles comments-

Awesome comments, Telephone you make me laugh. Haha.

Thanksies again. ^^

[[=Crazy Lee=]]
Telephone

17/Female
Las Vegas, NV
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
*American accent* Omigosh omigosh omigosh! *dials number on 'cell phone'* Ya, Charlene? Yeahh... yeahh it's Louanne, CHECK THIS OUT! *hold 'cell phone' to screen*
never_more

19/Female
Arvada, CO
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
that was great!!! strong feelings tend to be great to write about, and you so totally made your point.

Good job!
Ink_Thief

19/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
Just, like,

OHMEGODZZTHATWASSOFREAKINAMAZING!
russoaly

14/Female
Colombia
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
I loved it =3
brutusdog

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
WOW

Amazing

I'm not joking

It's AMAZING

I want to kiss my computer because of its amazingness

5***************S

Brutie
Hollisterr_

20/Female
Yugoslavia
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
Whoaa.

That Was Awesome!

:]
Poision_Ivy

20/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: October 5, 2008
I think this is probably the most meaningful poem I've ever read on TDP so far. It's my opinion, I'm just saying so people don't barge in and complain how this isn't, buut to me this is very in-depth.

It's beautiful darlig, it really honest-to-god it is. ^_^

-Kishie
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