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||POEM|| Pleading Hope

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By gothicgirl1 Send DollMailSend EmailICQAIMYIM
Created: 2009-08-17 22:29:45 All stories by gothicgirl1
It takes courage to save someone

Or is it stupidity

Wander around alone my life

Searching for my identity

Travel cross the oceans blue

Maybe I'll find another you

Before all of my reality

Causes another fatality

Hunting through ancient tombs

Suffocating in a mothers womb

It takes strength to fight

Or is it cowardliness

I want to find you again

A flame of love burning begins

Torches the edges of mind

Without anything left behind

A hollow empty rotted shell

Doomed forever in prison cell

It takes love to stop a war

Or is it loneliness

Leafless trees in a breeze

A sound of an awful wheeze

Dripping oozing ruby blood

Blended with dried on mud

Tired can not move

Just might loose

It takes beliefs to halt the fear

Or is it all a dream

Sitting rocking in a stance

Praying for another chance

Dying crouching puking blood

Lying down in the dried up mud

Shuddered breathing leaving slow

Just one thing left to know

How life is so unjust

It is never that fair

Ending with a pull or cut

Triggers daggers razor blades

Leaving alone just one last thing

The last thing that one must known

Is right before they begin to mourn

Remember the fine blessed art of

Pleading Hope
  

Member Comments  
gothicgirl1

21/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: November 28, 2008
Awww, 0Rii, you're so sweet! I think your poems are meaningful.

Overall I think that this is one of my worst poems, It hardly makes sense to me..... But thank you so much for saying so, it makes my heart swell.

xAndy
Original_scree

20/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: November 28, 2008
That was beautiful. Makes me wish my poetry was meaningful...

--0Rii
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