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Hi, my name is Tom Riddle
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{Disturbed Childhood} -- [Prologue]

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By MisZ_d3mEAn0R Send DollMailSend EmailVisit WebsiteAIMYIM
Created: 2008-01-23 10:39:14 All stories by MisZ_d3mEAn0R
[Prologue]

Tom Marvolo Riddle sat hunched over a yellowing journal on his bunk in the orphanage dormitory. He clutched an ancient ballpoint pen in his left hand, and a flashlight in his right. Tiny snores erupted from the other orphans, enveloped in their subconscious thoughts. Tentative footsteps outside the door caused Tom to quickly switch off his flashlight and dive under the covers.

Light from the hallway illuminated a plump, graying woman. She stood framed in the doorway for a few moments, then smiled, satisfied."Sleep well..." she murmured, quietly shutting the door and tip-toeing away.

"Freak..." muttered Tom, immediately removing himself from the covers and switching the flashlight on once more.

"You know, you really should be sleeping," grumbled a sleepy voice, two bunks away from Tom.

"Shut up, Adrienne," said Tom, rudely. "Go back to sleep." Adrienne forced herself into a sitting position and glared at Tom.

"You know," she declared, "I don't think I've ever met anyone ruder than you, Thomas Riddle."

"I said, SHUT UP!!" roared Tom. Sleepy murmurs arose from several beds in the dormitory. Tom fell silent, a sullen expression on his face as he picked up his journal and continued to scribble his dark thoughts onto the crumpled, aging pages.

"Now you've gone and woken everyone up!" she scolded. Tom slid off of his bunk and stomped out of the room, bringing his flashlight with him, and leaving his journal on the quilt. Adrienne followed suit, marching smartly behind Tom.

"You'll get into loads of trouble if you leave the dorm," warned Adrienne.

"Go away," growled Tom, quickening his pace. Adrienne was now jogging to keep up with him.

"Where are you going?" she asked, panting.

"It's none of your business."

"It is TOO my business, seeing as I'm coming with you."

"No, you're NOT."

"I am, too!"

"NO, YOU'RE NOT."

"YES, I--" A terrified shriek escaped Adrienne's gaping mouth as an unseen force threw her violently against the side of the orphanage building. She gasped. "Tom, what--"

"GO BACK."

Preparing to argue, Adrienne caught sight of Tom's pale face, contorted with anger. Blinded by fear, she scrambled back towards the dorm as fast as her scrawny legs would allow her.

Tom looked at his hands. They were chalk white in the milky illumination of the soft, yellow moon. He twisted his fingers. To him, they appeared to be long, spindly claws. Tom didn't know what had happened any more than Adrienne. But strange things always happened when he was angry...when he was sad...when he was upset. He sat down on the damp grass, seized a handful of weeds, and pulled. A large clump of green grass sat in his outstreched palm. Tom watched as the grass slowly turned brown, then shriveled. It was uncanny, the way strange things always happened around Tom Marvolo Riddle.

[[Continued.]]

Tell me what you think!! It's different...I thought I'd try writing from the perspective of the bad guy for once.

Thanks for reading! =]
  

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gothicgirl1

18/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: June 8, 2008
I love it....

andy
XOkillerDIORxo

14/Female
Forks, WA
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Posted On: May 17, 2008
this was amazing

keep me updated please!

TessaRoo713

14/Female
Canada
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Posted On: May 17, 2008
Yeah, nobody writes about Tom. Now that is what you call a TRUE (yeah everybody, your stories are boring now) Harry Potter fan-fic. Duh! There is nothing more awesome than this except Ron, Fred and George *hugs them*.

- Tessa
xHeartattack__

18/Female
Argentina
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Posted On: May 16, 2008
I loved it. It's stuck in my head and I cannot say anything more, lol.

~*Destiny*~ You were ment for Me.Perhaps as a Punishment.
XxStarfrostWar

14/Female
Canada
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Posted On: May 15, 2008
GAH! This is amazing!

: )

Starfrost
MAP

14/Female

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Posted On: April 16, 2008
nice.
Ink_Thief

15/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 7, 2008
Tis brilliant :]
wittlepunkerXx

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: April 2, 2008
I thought I had commented on this story, but I guess not. I lubbed it and I'd like to hug Tom too! I lublub him! [But not as much as Draco. Muaw haw haw he is MINE!]

Susie x]
suga2suga

17/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: February 6, 2008
OMG! You are such a good writer! I see sooo many poorly written hogwarts stories! It's so nice to see you are one of the few who can write a good story! 5 stars and good luck with your series
TuNaFiSHiE__

13/Female
United Kingdom
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Posted On: January 29, 2008
its not just wonderful, its AMAZINGG. thank u, peggie, lily, and xPARAMORElove, and jen for agreeing with ME. honestly, this story is so different from all the other ones here. xPARAMORElove, please DM me when u come out with ur voldy story, because i think im hooked on the voldy point of view. LOVE YAH, TOM!!

lovee;adrienne-kaleigh.
starandpop

13/Female
Colorado Springs, CO
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Posted On: January 26, 2008
Awesome!

Keep me updated!

xoxo,

Jen
xPARAMORElove

18/Female
CA
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Posted On: January 26, 2008
It's wonderful.

I was going to write something like this. In fact, I'm actually working on it right now...
elmolver45

13/Female
Lake Saint Louis, MO
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Posted On: January 23, 2008
I agree with Peggie.

It's good to finally see Tom's side of the story.

Keep me updated!

LiLY
LyingNaked

15/Female
Australia
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Posted On: January 23, 2008
Twas lovely. It's about time someone wrote about my precious Tom.

*huggles Tom*

-- && peggz;;
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