The Triwizard Tournament {Repost}

[spirit_queen]

"Yes, we shall," Pyotr said, offernig his arm as though escorting her to a dance.

[Miranda_]

Faina laughed and took Pyotr's arm. She walked back to the Durmstrang ship with him; it was still fairly cold outside, but after all, Faina and Pyotr would be used to cold temperatures.

[spirit_queen]

This was fairly mild to them, as the Siberian Durmstrang was located in northern Siberia, a very extreme place to live. Pyotr himself lived in Southern Siberia, near Novosibirsk, a fairly large city. The weather wasn't constantly cold there, and actually had some hot summers.

In fact, the weather around Hogwarts was almost like home to Pyotr, and made him think of his childhood often.

[Miranda_]

Faina lived fairly near to Pyotr, and was already making plans to visit during the school holidays.

When they reached the ship, Faina immediately searched out her essay.

[spirit_queen]

Pyotr got out his and quickly scanned for simple spelling errors.

[Miranda_]

"I just can't think of a way to add a conclusion," Faina said. She handed her essay to Pyotr. "You read it, and see if you can figure one out."

[spirit_queen]

Pyotr sat down and began to read her paper, eyeing it for mistakes an trying to get an overall feel for her writing.

[Miranda_]

Faina's essay was fairly well written; it just obviously lacked a conclusion.

[spirit_queen]

Finally, Pyotr said, "For your conclusion, I'd suggest highlighting the importance precision in this branch of Transfig, or maybe reiterate some of those tips ou mentioned earlier but reworded. Something like that, so that you can recap the essay without being too redundant or simply rewording your intro."

[Miranda_]

Faina smiled and took the essay back. "That's fantastic, I never would have thought of that," she said.