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Default 08-04-2007, 11:40 AM

Ooc: Oh. And that last post should have quotes, and be more like

"Mum, me and Spohie have homework to do!"

"Alright, one night! But then no more sleepovers for a WEEK!"


But, yeah, don't use numbers in place of words, it can make a perfectly respectable roleplayer, such as yourself, look like a complete nOOb.

Hellen blinked in shock as she heard the arguing, for she and her mom never had argued that much until the day before she died... Can't go thinkin' about that Hellen, it'll just bring back the tears. Hellen thought, though her eyes sparkled now a little.


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Default 08-04-2007, 11:46 AM

ooc: I know I keep saying thanks for the help, but thanks to you it's improved my skills.

bic: "So, I can stay here for one night. Is there anything else you want to show me?" Maybe we can go down into the basement!



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Default 08-04-2007, 11:56 AM

Ooc: Really, it's no problem. You're already okay to begin with, and you don't take the criticism badly. ^^

"Not really, unless you want to see the gardens, or maybe the pool. Have any ideas as of what you'd like to see?" Hellen finally asked, deciding to hear Henri's thoughts on this. She could now feel that they were, indeed, being watched by the vampire king, but she tried to ignore the faint presence.


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Default 08-04-2007, 11:59 AM

ooc: This is sorta going nowhere now....

bic: "In the gardens, please!"



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Ooc: Well, I can make it go somewhares...

Hellen felt the presence strengthen, and she stiffened, feeling his voice in her head. "I expected better of you, Hellen. Bring our guest to me, now." The voice was so sweet, so gentle souding, but it sent shivers down her spine. Hellen turned to Hanri, knowing she couldn't disobey. "The basement is on the way to the gardens, wanna go there, too?" She asked, masking her tru emotions.


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ooc: So kill-myselfingly..bored.

bic: The basement? Woohoo! "Erm..Yes, I would like to go to the basement."



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Ooc: LOL!

Hellen lead her back to the steps, saying. "We can slide dow the rail you now. It's really easy."


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Default 08-04-2007, 12:20 PM

When Hellen said that, Henri remembered a day at school. Her and a few boys were having a "Railsliding Championships" and she won. Nah, I'd better not tell her that. And slid down.



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Ooc: This is Hellen's dress. ((CLICKERS!))

Hellen followed, feeling guilty for having to lead this girl to her doom.

Once they reached the bottom, Hellen fixed her skirts, then lead Henri back down the Main Hall to the passage to the basement. "There's no electricity in the basement, so I have to ake a candle, hold on." Hellen said, picking up a candle that was in a nitch. She lit it with a match, then opened the door to the basement.


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Default 08-04-2007, 12:29 PM

ooc: Her dress looks really nice. I wish I had one like it LOL. and it's time I could be watching my fav show on tv! I might be gone for half an hour.

bic: I saw someone in a chair. "Who's that?" I asked, curiously.



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