Harry Potter RP {For RPG Newbies ONLY}

[Miranda_]

A muggleborn would not know how to levitate; most muggleborns haven't even heard of anything to do with witchcraft before they enter Hogwarts, so it's very unlikely a muggleborn would have perfected levitation. The same goes for flying. You also need more character and personality weaknesses, as your character is still a Mary Sue.

[PrettyGirl422]

Full Name: Mandy Ease
Name or nickname they like to be called by: Mannie
House Desired (Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor): Gryffindor
Gender: Girl
Age: 11
Appearance: Long brown hair, big blue eyes, 5'2"
Personality: Shy at first, outgoing, strong, and very neat when it comes to fashion.
Class (as in Pure Blood, Half Blood, or Muggleborn): Pure Blood...
Strengths (as in subjects and non-subjects): Very good at spells, and a pro at riding her broom
Weaknesses (as in subjects and non-subjects): muggle studies and Dark Arts

[Silent_Wolf]

Can you not read? NO MORE PUREBLOODS! Also, she has no non-subject studies, which further makes her a Sue.

[Miranda_]

Please can you edit your profile, as you need character weaknesses and to be either a half blood or a muggle born? If you don't, you will not be allowed to RP.

[Xx_Pixie_Dust_Dispenser_xX]

I'm very new to this so please bare with me!
Full Name: Serena Wilhelmina
Name or nickname they like to be called by: Serena
House Desired (Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor): Slytherin
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Appearance: Deep Brunette of average height for her age(about 5'1") with peircing green eyes and naturally wavy hair,in her uniform of course.
Personality: Cannot keep comments to herself,rarely shy,does not open up to people easily,especially those of the opposite gender,easy going,although she can be a bit bossy,impatient,likes to be the center of attention,many friends,fairly good self-confidence.
Class (as in Pure Blood, Half Blood, or Muggleborn): Half Blood (Father wizard,mother muggle)
Strengths (as in subjects and non-subjects): Transfiguration,Muggle Studies and History of Magic and making friends.
Weaknesses (as in subjects and non-subjects): Charms,Herbology,Potions,keeping her mouth shut,and too quick to judge people.

Serena fidgeted impatiently beside her friends(who she had met on the train)as she watched the students scurry to and from the sorting hat and their tables. She couldn't wait for her turn to be assigned a house, which she was hoping was Slytherin. Although her parents wanted her to be in Griffyndor,as they both had been, Serena was hoping for Slytherin because she thought of Gryffindor as, "The House of Goody-Goodies." "Come on already,"Serena mumbled to herself.
She could barely take any more of their annoying giggling about how much they wanted into Gryffindor
"Serena Wilhelmina,"called the sorting hat.
Serena pranced over to the stool,placed the dusty hat on her head and sat cross-legged on the crooked old stool.
"Hmm..a half blood..both parents of Gryffindor,interesting..definetly not a Ravenclaw..imperious,yes..self-assured..very social..not a HufflePuff either..hmm a very hard decision..you are brave,yet bold,good qualities for Gryffindor..indeed..but not quite..Slytherin!"announced the hat.
She placed the hat back on the stool and rushed over to the Slytherin table and sat down.Most of the Slytherins merely turned there heads.
"Gryffindor doesn't sound so bad now,"Serena thought to herself.
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Thank you for the help Miranda

[Miranda_]

Why would she have friends in Slytherin, if she's a first year? And you're making the mistake that a previous person made before cleanup; the Slytherins are unlikely to extensively cheer a newbie to their house. You also need more weaknesses and obvious ones, too; your character is a Mary Sue. Finally, why would she single out Malfoy? He doesn't know her, and is a pureblood snob. She's unlikely to have mixed with him beforehand. Please be a bit realistic.

[PrettyGirl422]

Sorry!!! x100 I really ddin't know that since I'm kind of new... can I make a new character? Here's my new one...

Name: Carly Lavendoor
Name or nickname they like to be called by: Carles
House Desired (Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor): Gryffindor...
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Appearance: Think blonde hair with brunette highlights, she has big green, peircing eyes that glow like fire, kind of short (5'2") and very skinny (114 lbs)
Personality: Very shy, kind of weak, a little strong, very quiet, very smart and she isn't a dumb blonde, big heart, an excited type, and fun
Class: half blood
Strengths: Muggle Studies, Charms, and History of Magic
Weaknesses: Making friends, Transfiguration, Potions, and being more open

[Miranda_]

Being new is no excuse; if you'd bothered to read the first page, you'd know all that.

Please don't have such a flowery name for your character; and you don't need to use descriptions like "eyes that glow like fire"; those too are Mary Sue characteristics. And how can she be "kind of weak" and "a little strong", and "quiet" and "an excited type" at the same time? Please edit your profile.

[Jamie___x]

EDITTTT--
Full Name:Josh Kailim
Name or nickname they like to be called by:Josh,Joshy,Jo
House Desired (Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor): Ravenclaw
Gender:Boy
Age: 11
Appearance: medium brown hair,green eyes, 5'1"
Personality:Kind to others,loves to learn and takes after his father,is quiet at times,is loud mouthed and over protective at times.
Class (as in Pure Blood, Half Blood, or Muggleborn):Half Blood(Father wizard)
Strengths (as in subjects and non-subjects):Muggle artifacts(because of his mother being muggle),Dark arts and potions(Taking after his father)
Weaknesses (as in subjects and non-subjects):Flying,Transfiguration and herbology.
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Josh made his way through to the middle of the pile of first years. He felt very anxious at the fact it was his first year aswell.As the time went by his name was eventually called out.
Josh felt a turn in his stomache,more like a tickle.He eventually pulled himself together and walked up to the stubby wooden stool.He sat down on it, looking rather short.The cold dusty hat was placed on his head and he felt a tingle as the hat began to speak.
"hmm..this is very hard..umm..has the brains of his father thats for sure..ahh i know..." as the hat called out Ravenclaw..Josh nearly fainted.
He was releifed that he had made it to the house his father and grandfather was in.As he sat down at the long narrow table of the Ravenclaw house he was filled with a great feeling.After looking at his fathers year book the night before..Josh felt special. He placed a smile on his face.

[Miranda_]

There's no personality faults listed at all; it's unlikely that a Gryffindor would exceed at Potions due to Snape's favouritism, and certainly not DADA as well, also Gryffindor is for the brave of heart; someone exceptionally clever would be more likely to end up in Ravenclaw. Also, I already said that levitation is NOT TO BE LISTED AS A STRENGTH! It's not a subject for one thing; levitating objects is Charms, levitating yourself or other people is something that a first year certainly wouldn't know how to do. Be realistic, for goodness sake.