Harry Potter RP {For RPG Newbies ONLY}

[Sarah_K_O_M]

That character is against the RP rules. They have to be 11, not fifteen or any other age.
And you posted no personality flaws for him either, which you have to do.

[Courtney_0x]

Name: Liibby riddle
Nickname/preffered name: liibby
House:Slytherin
Gender: Female
Age:11
Appearance: long blonde hair with sort of pale face black eyes (bit like snapes)
Personality: Sometimes can be nice
Class: Pure-blood
Strengths: potions (sp)
Weaknesses: Herbology
Little bit else about her: she is a follower of voldemort (shares same second name)
snapes best student every one thinks he fancy her but she says no but i think she does a bit
Hates hermoine likes to call her mudblood
oh yeah and she speaks parsltonge (snake)
hermoine always trys to make out liibbys the kid of voldemort
And knows deatheaters like the malfoys

[Sarah_K_O_M]

And that right there is a Mary Sue. Not allowed.

Eleven year olds can't be Death Eaters.
Snape loves Lily Evans. Her and her alone. Have you even read the books? ALso, she's ELEVEN. That's just sick.
Hermione doesn't care about your Mary Sue.
Parseltongue is cliched.
Almost everyone in the books know the Malfoys.

[Miranda_]

Agreed. Please both of you change your Mary Sues, or you won't be allowed to RP here. You should also read the main RPG forum rules, which can be found stuck at the top of the forum.

Also, I've decided. NO MORE PURE-BLOODS ALLOWED. I'm getting fed up with people being purebloods, when if you'd read the books you'd know that there aren't that many of those around. And the ones that are around are all related and a little crazy.

[CupcakesRock]

Character Bio Outline: An eleven year old boy who enjoys drawing, writing, and just being himself. Both of his parents are muggleborn, and his grandfather is a wizard. He takes after his grandfather, since he admires his grandfathers art greatly. He has a small circle of friends, and is very anti-social around people he doesn't know, or doesn't feel comfortable around.

Full Name: Mikhail H. White

Name or nickname they like to be called by: Mike

House Desired (Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff, Gryffindor): Hufflepuff

Gender: Male

Age: 11

Appearance: Brown hair with bangs ; Brown eyes ; Light/Pale Skin ; Tall (About '5"5) ; Very Skinny.

Personality: Very outgoing with his few friends/social circle, but very quiet/antisocial around strangers/unliked people. Is very organized and always cares about the people he loves feelings'.

Class (as in Pure Blood, Half Blood, or Muggleborn): Muggleborn.

Strengths (as in subjects and non-subjects): Artistic subjects (such as drawing, painting, etc.), and Potions.

Weaknesses (as in subjects and non-subjects): Talking to girls, strangers, or people he just met, DADA, and Flying.

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Sweat ran down the back of Mikhail's neck as he waited patiently to be sorted. Being who he was, a quite, anti-social artist, Mikhail knew he wouldn't get into Slytherin or Ravenclaw, but that didn't bother him, he would be happy getting into Hufflepuff or Gryffindor, but what bothered him the most was meeting new people and making new friends. He already missed his friends back home, and was very depressed at the fact that he had to leave them.

As millions of thoughts and water droplets ran through Mikhail, he heard his name being called out by the woman in the green bath robes, "White, Mikhail!"

Mikhail nearly fainted as he walked up to the three-legged stool and sat on it, waiting for hat to be placed on his head. Soon enough, it lay on his head, and a soothing voice began speaking into his ear.

"Mikhail White? That's exactly what you expect a muggleborn to be named. Well... you're very quiet... yet artistic... oh! Look at that... anti-social, hm? Well... you're neither Slytherin or Ravenclaw... you don't seem like a Gryffindor... I guess that leaves... HUFFLEPUFF!"

Mikhail sighed, and walked over to the quiet Hufflepuff table, wondering what awaits him.

OOC: Was that good? D:

[Miranda_]

Ooc: Looks fine to me, you may continue. ^^

[CupcakesRock]

OOC: Thank you so much. ;DD

[Doctorwho_gal]

Ooc: People don't seem to be posting much but I would like to join if thats ok ^^

Character Bio Outline:
Full Name: Esperanza Dancer
Name or nickname they like to be called by: Espe
House Desired : Hufflepuff
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Appearance: Short messy hair dyed bright pink, tanned skin, wears bright colours, petit, pixie like face.
Personality: Loud, Confident, usually popular, dramatic, bouncy, can be insensitive and selfish. Tends to misbehave
Class: Half Blood (Father muggle, Mother pureblood.)
Strengths : Care of Magical Creatures, Charms.
Weaknesses : Arthimancy, Ancient Runes.

[Miranda_]

That's a bit Sue-ish. The name is elabourate; in the books, only the purebloods seem to have elabourate names (ie Sirius, Draco). Students wouldn't be allowed to dye their hair; students can only wear the uniform, which is black; finally, Arithmancy and Ancient Runes are options. Why would she choose them if she's bad at them?

[Doctorwho_gal]

Ooc: Ok, sorry. I'll change it. I was writing for the characters general persona not just their school one. I meant their clothes out of school ect. And I didn't think the name was that elabourate xD


Character Bio Outline:
Full Name: Erin Dancer
Name or nickname they like to be called by: None
House Desired : Hufflepuff
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Appearance: Short messy light brown hair, tanned skin, petit, pixie like face.
Personality: Loud, Confident, usually fairly popular, dramatic, bouncy, can be insensitive and selfish. Average intelligence, not a hard worker.
Class: Half Blood (Father muggle, Mother pureblood.)
Strengths : Care of Magical Creatures, Charms.
Weaknesses : Defense Against the Dark Arts, Potions.

Ooc: I hope thats better.