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Default Uta's animations~ - 04-29-2012, 02:11 PM

I'm new to animating. This one came out bigger than expected, but I still love her.

I plan on making more soon, but I'd love some critques on this one. :3

I made her on this. The animation was gickr, and the edits were made by gimp and fotoflexer.



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Default 04-29-2012, 02:37 PM

Good job for your first try! The outfit is cute and I like the hairstyle. Only critique that I have is that the head's skin tone is different from the rest of the body's. That's a simple fix that can be done in paint. Other than that it's good! What animation program are you using?


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Default 04-29-2012, 03:00 PM

Gickr. I don't have any programs on my computer at the moment, but this is just as helpful. Thanks for the critique! I'll try that next time~


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Default 04-29-2012, 04:13 PM

This one's Maggie.

I didn't make her blink (I feel like I should have).
Her shirt is a little.. well, illfitting, or looks like it.
I messed up on the letters, which is pretty obvious (I'm beginning to dislike fotoflexer..)

But, anyway, critiques?


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Default 04-30-2012, 06:59 PM

Nice! I like the doll and the wording. Although the pic seem to be a bit blurry. I don't know if you knew, but there are some tutorials in the forums. They really help me out!
Here's one for winking/blinking/kiss Making dolls blink... and kiss. Muah!
and here's one for Doll animation tutorial
If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask me.


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Default 05-01-2012, 09:38 AM

There's also this general tut which I put together.

How To Create Winking/Flashing/Glittery Dolls.

Hope it helps.


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