Okay, seriously angel, SHUT THE HELL UP. I am sick and TIRED of you attacking people! You're an immature little emo wannabe brat and I'm amazed you haven't been grounded for eternity if you act like this to your parents! You don't deserve to even be on a computer and quite frankly if you keep this up you will get banned again. Nobody cares about your whiney "horrible" life, your poetry isn't even really poetry, GET OVER YOURSELF. Your life is NOT that freakin' horrible!
Also, I swear to god if you keep attacking Audre or any other users on here, I will seriously get ticked off and I will not hesitate to scream at you. You have done nothing but be nasty to other users for as much as calling your poetry "not poetry", and we have tried to tell you how to improve, but you smashed it back into their faces with yet another crappy poem and then you go and stalk everybody you're able across the board, on their profiles of all things!
Thanks a lot for snapping my last nerve, you obnoxious little brat.
I am going to say some good things about your poetry, instead of hating it.
There are a lot of good smilies, like the one Lexi pointed out, and it is good you are using bigger and intelligent words but maybe you could try looking for a specific poetry like, try writing a poem in the form of a haiku or a ballad.
you should take some of the CC that people are trying to give you if you want to improve.
Well,than you should listen to my advice and not being depressed all the time because it will make ya feel better if you talk about the good and not just the bad.
And you should stop being rude and if you want my opion of my favorute parts about your poems re a few of the symolies,like life is like a cup of tea,it takes just one wrong action to mess it up.
Can` you just use those great symolies in happy poems?
2. you talk about how terrible your life
is to me, I prove to you how rediculous
your being, so then you just say you never
asked when you DID. youa asked repetitivley.
SERIOUSLY this time. im ignoring your next comment
cuz it will just be something to run away
from my argument.
truely depressed people
dont go around ranting to everyone
about how terrible theyre life is.
thats what EMOS do and emos arent
really depressed they just want pity.
yes, people at your age CAN become depressed.
I read about it in a book. a 12 yearold commited
suicide. however, she didnt go around to
everyone saying "my life sucks so much is
a black sorrow of pain" or whatever.
I hope I don`t sound rude but maybe she`s trying to defend herself,and you shouldn`t tell her to shut up or that she`ll be haunted,and you think that your going through the worst things ever and you crave some attention sometimes.
Also, I swear to god if you keep attacking Audre or any other users on here, I will seriously get ticked off and I will not hesitate to scream at you. You have done nothing but be nasty to other users for as much as calling your poetry "not poetry", and we have tried to tell you how to improve, but you smashed it back into their faces with yet another crappy poem and then you go and stalk everybody you're able across the board, on their profiles of all things!
Thanks a lot for snapping my last nerve, you obnoxious little brat.
There are a lot of good smilies, like the one Lexi pointed out, and it is good you are using bigger and intelligent words but maybe you could try looking for a specific poetry like, try writing a poem in the form of a haiku or a ballad.
you should take some of the CC that people are trying to give you if you want to improve.
And you should stop being rude and if you want my opion of my favorute parts about your poems re a few of the symolies,like life is like a cup of tea,it takes just one wrong action to mess it up.
Can` you just use those great symolies in happy poems?
about your poetry.
2. you talk about how terrible your life
is to me, I prove to you how rediculous
your being, so then you just say you never
asked when you DID. youa asked repetitivley.
SERIOUSLY this time. im ignoring your next comment
cuz it will just be something to run away
from my argument.
dont go around ranting to everyone
about how terrible theyre life is.
thats what EMOS do and emos arent
really depressed they just want pity.
yes, people at your age CAN become depressed.
I read about it in a book. a 12 yearold commited
suicide. however, she didnt go around to
everyone saying "my life sucks so much is
a black sorrow of pain" or whatever.