My *first* handdrawns

[Andjelija]

I gave a try at doing hand-drawns, so: here's my *first* attempt, i couldn't find a good hair tutorial, so the hair isn't good... The shoes are shaded, but, they're kind'a small, so you can't see it very well. Tell me what you think.
The link to the base

[belladoggy]

Well, I'm pretty new at it myself, but Miranda showed me this tutorial: Full Doll Tutorial

which seemed to help, also I found this one very helpful with explaining hair: P i x ** P a r a d i s e **** , combing the two techniques seems to be working for me

[Andjelija]

Thanks. That really helped. And here's another one:

Base:Deac loves you

[KiraIMustBeInvisible]

The pants and shirt look a little pillowy, but it's hard to avoid that on a small base such as that one. The hair is good, but it's hard to tell if there's any shading @~@ That may be just because it's so small >.< Also, with the strands you want to try and keep it going at a fairly even curved line(if that makes sense o.O). Like, no jagged edges or anything. The easiest way to do this is with a curve tool(at least, if you using MS paint) if you're using a different program (i.e photoshop, gimp, ect) then you just have to try your best to keep it even.

[Andjelija]

I made a new doll, and here it is, so tell me what you think.


Base: Mariiii's doll house

Edit: Here's another one i made, it's a TDP base, and i really like the way it turned out, but i don"t like the hair though.
And here's the fixed version. I don't know: is it better with the lighter pants or with the darker ones?

i think you did a wonderfil job but the darker pants look a litlle better in my opinon