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Default 10-06-2009, 06:52 AM

That's a lot better; I can see that you're working hard on your dolls and using the tuts. ^^ A couple of things tho; firstly, the hair needs to be stranded more rather than cut off in blocks. If you look at your own hair, you'll see that it doesn't end like that. Plus, a few loose strands here and there will make it look more realistic by far. Second, the dress still looks a little pillowy, but the folds are definitely an improvement on your earlier dolls. Finally, you forgot base credit. I know it's a bore to remember it, but the best thing to do is save the link in notepad before you start working on your doll so you can just add it in before you post the finished doll.


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Default 10-06-2009, 07:01 AM

Boy..You have improved, the dress on this doll is shaded really well, it just needs a little work on the creases and it looks slightly pillowy, thats it, Practice makes perfect Well done!

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Default 10-08-2009, 12:54 AM

Yay!!!
I made myself a doll using tuts and your advice, please tell me whtcha think:3


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Default 10-08-2009, 04:56 AM

Aw she's adorable! I love the outfits you come up with, they're so cute.

There's one thing that sticks out against your progress though and it's that everything is being shaded excecpt for the stringy parts. You should try shading them too next time!


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Default 10-08-2009, 08:54 AM

omg chessie it is adorable and u have improved quite a bit!! could u make me a handdrawn doll lol
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Default 10-08-2009, 07:57 PM

Yes Lexi pls let me I am so bored right now lol. Thanks I'm so glad u like her!!! She's pretty cute but I don't quite feel good about the moon. I wish I had that dress tho:3

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Default 10-08-2009, 07:59 PM

o_o I want to comment on the hair. *pokes it* It's stranded , unlike so many peoples'! X3 Of course the stranding could take work but it's still good.
Please, base credit! ^^" Although I think it may be meganclare I'm not sure.
Hmmm The folds....of the dress....D8
The folds look as if she has abs <_<;
It's good fora newbie! Nice palette choise 8D Blue lewks awesome with black.
Basecredit plox. (For the black and blue doll; hol don I'm working on comment sfor the other one)

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The other one's....meh, it looks unfinished. Could be touched up witha few more palette shades, but it's really pretty. :3
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Default 10-08-2009, 08:01 PM

The base credit is below??? KawaiiHannah made the base...
Yeah I'm still working on shading lol
Oh sorry you meant the other one I completely forgot about base credit I'm really sorry XD
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Default 10-08-2009, 08:25 PM

hey chessie since u are bored can u make me a doll that looks like me lol with surprise clothing but with something that is my fav color and a bow in the hair thanks! cant wait to see it
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Default 10-08-2009, 08:30 PM

Yup, I have to make my mrs Lovett too though so It miught not be ready super quick but yes I'll begin now lol
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