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X_SWEET_TEMPTATION_X 03-01-2009 03:40 PM

Audrey's hand drawn
 

base from KawaiiHannah.com :: Online Portfolio of Web Design, Illustration and Pixel Art.
please comment.

antimaie 03-01-2009 11:59 PM

The dress looks like it's on the verge of being pillow shaded, you kinda want to get away from that, but it's pretty good for a beginner! ^^

Heva_Banana_Mad 03-02-2009 03:25 PM

I like the hair but in my opinion the shape of it should be more natural because I think it looks like the shape of the hair you get on barbie dolls but that's probably just me. It's shaded REALLY well though exept as antimaie said it looks like it was very close to being pillow shaded.

If you want to check out some tutorials then there are some great ones at Watermelon Bubblegum and also in the tutorial forum.

Sorry I guess I'll just shut up now. *sticks tape over mouth*...

X_SWEET_TEMPTATION_X 03-02-2009 05:57 PM

thanks for the comments and the CC

awesomeistic 03-02-2009 07:16 PM

I think it needs more values like shinier hair and darker shadows on the dress.

X_SWEET_TEMPTATION_X 03-07-2009 01:40 AM

here's another one:


There's a story to her. She this is Arabella, she lived in a world that the powerful people, were, the richer they are. She keeps her power a secret. with her mind and hand movements, she could control people like puppets. She got the mane of puppet master from her friend whose obsessed with puppets. I hope to post the story on here one day. (there's more detail to the costume, but I, still learning)

Base:Mariiiis Dolls House

Kiwi_Kat 03-07-2009 10:22 AM

That's better. But the dress needs to look a little more natural on the bottom. And yes the hair need to have some highlights. But the shadin on the dress has improved ten fold! Good work!

X_SWEET_TEMPTATION_X 03-07-2009 12:30 PM

thanks:grin:

jordanashley 03-07-2009 11:25 PM

Nice. I really like them both! But I agree with what Heva said about the first one's hair. I love the second one's dress, though!

X_SWEET_TEMPTATION_X 03-08-2009 11:21 PM



here's another one. The spots mean I miss a spot on erasing the back ground.


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