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Default 12-29-2010, 12:54 PM

Hmm...yeah I see what you mean about the shirt >3< I think it was just the palette I was using, and also because of how small a space I had to work with for it but yeah...anywhos, thank you for your CC It's very appreciated!



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Default 12-29-2010, 05:00 PM

Hmm. I feel as if the palette does not go from light to dark enough.
Try darker shades of colour for the shadows.
Usually hair is strandy.

There is usually a shadow on the skin behind the clothing/hair.

If the arm indeed is like that, then there should be a shadow on the shirt behind it.

That's all. Your dolls are very pretty. :]
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Default 12-29-2010, 05:59 PM

Shank you for you input ^-^ 'tis much appreciated! I'm trying a new doll now, hopefully it'll turn out better >3<



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Default 12-29-2010, 07:54 PM

No, your doll was pretty. I'm just nitpicky.

I wish you good luck. <3
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Default 12-30-2010, 09:49 PM

New doll!



base: Star Girl

I love her bases ^-^'

Sooo the hair i'm super proud of ^^ I used TheHayleyDoll's tut to help, and it think it came out well.
The shirt...i dunno. I don't like it. >3<
The pants were going to be jeggings...but it looked pooey. so yeah. it ended up being that. and it's icky. The only thing i like about this doll is the hair.



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Default 12-31-2010, 01:12 AM

Hmm..yeah well...that was sort of the idea xD but it didn't come out how i wanted it to. Have you ever seen those like clothes and stuff that are like a different color in the light? That was what i was tryingto do but it didn't work to well >3<

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woah...this was supposed to come after Cheshire's post...whaaattt 0_0



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Default 12-31-2010, 02:07 AM

It looks good!

Just a little CC, I think the reason the top looks a little funny is because of the pallette, it seems to go from blue to pink which is a little iffy and may be why you don't like it as much.



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Default 12-31-2010, 02:17 PM

Your definaltey getting better. (:

On the hair, I htink there is too much dark by her ears. If you trim it down and then make the highlights bigger, it'd be perfect.



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Default 12-31-2010, 04:08 PM

Thank you!

New dollie ^-^



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Umm yeah. I tried a new hair tehcnique(sp?) and I like how it turned out umm..the dress I did in like 5 minutes because she needed something to wear, so please don't comment about that, it's rechid.



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Default 01-01-2011, 03:06 PM

The hair is a LOT better, my only CC is that you should add a few strands here and there, because her hair looks quite plastic-y.

The dress top is awkward, but the creases in the dress at her hips are perfect, you got that part right. (:



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