i need some cc an my first handrawn

[chelsea_welsea_1]

~ A u t u m n ~ P i x e l s ~
this is where i got the base they have lots of really pretty bases


this is my first one so please give alot of cc and you can be harsh i wont be sad i want you to be harsh

i hope i did all the links right

[noirmali]

Whee, post the actual dollie here T^T
ALso, resize it ^^

See? ;D
CC: GOOD FOR YOUR FIRST DOLL~ ^^
I just love teh shirt.
The skirt is pillow shaded though.
And the hair dont have shading...
GAH! GOTTA WATCH TOKYO DRIFT! x.x

[chelsea_welsea_1]

i dont know how to do that could you tell me.
and whats pillow shading?
and i did shade the hair i just did a horrible job and you can treally see it
thanks

[Macky]

That's great for your 1st dollie! ^^
I lubs the colors, and YAY SHADING! You make great hair too!
The skirt is a bit pillowshaded, you can find some tutorials and try to fix that.
The hair can have brighter highlights, and loose strands.

Great work for your 1st doll, keep up the fantastic work! <3

[noirmali]

Oh, yeah, now I see once I look closer ^.~
Anyway, you saved it in .BMP didn't you? T^T
Or JPG...
Ish REALLY blurry.
Save in .PNG, kay? ^^
Hmm...
Here, look here:
Mark's Pixel Art Tutorial
It sorta helps with the ball thingy. ^^

[noirmali]

Okay! Chelsea wants me to post it for her because she doesn't know how to crop and post properly ^^;

What do you think of her second?
Base is either by :: x a n d o r r a s :: p l a c e :: original cartoon dolls
Or DHF.
I don't know DHF's base linkie. :3
Gah. She didn't tell me where the base was from but it looked like it was from DHF or Xandorra. XD

[chelsea_welsea_1]

its from DHF : Doll on the Hill Factory
i know its still really crappy and i still cant figure out how to do the skirts and im really bad at hair. but i kinda like the shirt. what do you think? like i said be harsh. XD

[noirmali]

I already CCed...XD
Hmm..
Maybe my tutorial will help? o.o
kawaiidollsforever

[Macky]

I dunno if it would be any help, but I have 2 tutorials.
Top tutorial:

Hair tutorial:

[noirmali]

^ Gah! Hamstertail..T^T Newbies need to learn how to pixel in stuff w/ normal shading first, THEN go and do anime shading...
That's how I learned. :3