The hair's good, but do them in neater strands with more highlights. Clothes... you have bubble shaded some of them and some aren't even shaded at all, but I will refer you AGAIN to Doll Tutorial Search Engine: Main x3 Hope it helps!
ok its been a realllly long time since ive done one of these but here it is!
i have almost given up on hair completely.
its sooo hard!
can anyone give me some sites with good pallets and tutorials for beginners? please and thank you!