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Default 05-27-2008, 01:00 PM

The shortest story ever, haha if you say. It's my story but I cannot take the whole credit cause I took some ideas from other stories. Thanks everyone! Especially yorkz for the word 'Selcouthia'!

Missed fairy

March 03, The day which the people of Selcouthia trust on. On that day, a fairy comes at Selcouthia and spreads happiness all over Selcouthia. "Lofta, put the bear on the shelf, Oh no no! Sonda not like that!" Queen scoulded the servants. Everyone wasn't happy yet. They all were scoulded by the queen, everyday, everynight. They just wanted to quite the work but they knew the fairy would come and bring their happiness back, as well as others think. Before the fairy comes, we need to homes get ready.

"Polly, did you asked queen?" Polly's grandmother asked. "Grandma, the queen says mother has to go till she has work." Replied polly. Polly was a poor girl whom's mother is a servant at the queen's palace. "P-P-Polly, Don't wo-rry, I'll get there." Polly's mother shivered of fever. "Noooo Mom! You're sick, and I won't let you go there!"

"I'm going to present the-" The queen stopped her words. "Queen!" Princess stopped the queen. "What happened princess?" Asked the queen. "Polly's mother need to get to hospital!"

To be continued....

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I made it today, really short I know. Next part coming soon...Hope you like it I'm not intrested to post it on tdp stories at this moment...


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Question okay this is my writing poem thing - 05-31-2008, 06:04 AM

trust is blind
for we can never have faith in it
trust is bland
for we can never taste it
trust is dry
for we can never swim through it
trust is emotionless
for we can never feel it
trust is deaf
for it never reacts to our pleads
and most of all
trust is amazingly
unconstitutional and unpredictable.

what do you think?
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Default Poem About Me - 05-31-2008, 08:33 PM

I'm just an average teen girl, livin in her own little world
Tryin to find out what's right every day and night
Sometimes i'm a lil crazy but most times i'm shy
People laugh at me as they see me pass by
My heart is in sorrow and my soul is in deep pain
All my hopes and dreams feel like they're being drained away
I'm just like a rose, whose figure looks bold
But inside me there's a feeling that feels really cold
I'm so delicate inside and everyday i cried
But i need to stand up tall and look to the sky so proud
For today's my lucky day and i'm going to shout out loud
To the whole world, that i'm something so useful
I hate it when everyone thinks i'm not that truthful
My day will come when everyone will see
That god will be right by my side, watching over me.
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Angry 07-02-2008, 12:15 AM

Words you should know
the
meaning to before you read!
1.incolence rude to be
2.insomnia unable to sleep!
3.insulated to deny to
protect
themself.
4.rue to regret
5.moral being brave
to tell the truth.

You Lie
Your an
incolence
human
you
drive
me
to
insomnia
you
lie,
you
denied
it
you
insulated
the
truth
you
will
carry
around
rue.
They
beleved
you over
me,see
you insulater
you haunt me
i was being
moral
you the
demented denier
your demon acts.
have shattered my life into
broken peices.
your demon eyes
THESE ARE THE AFFECTS OF YOU
DREW!


Modly: Moving to the Poem Thread - Sarah. And it's Effects, not Affects by the way.

My heart is pounding my eyes are crying my insides are bleeding this ample moment this dreadful life,just take me away make the past just a unwanted sillhoutte that has departed from the soul
oh those yet so silent yet so haunting words i feel my heart jumping i feel fear in my soul i feel happiness yest again abanoning me i feel misery visiting again i feel sorrow coming to give me company i see the day i see darkness coming to visit my soul coming to torment such an ample experience such a sinister i hear my soul screaming i hear the fear of my soul coming to be my company i hear the sorrow my ever lasting company.MY URGE TO CAST A SPELL ON A SINISTER DEMON .Shivers passing through my body.Sorrow is a lingering visitor for me!Happiness has abaned me im just alone with sorrow!

My life is bent in a caged rage fence.Whats so pleasent about this scent? Just cause your dusky you lend me your sorrow that lasts more than today and tomorrow

The dance of sorrow in my soul
All of these thoughts lacing my soul up with sorrow for today and tomorrow. Sorrow dances in my temped soul like an Indian dancer.The happy petals of life faded away. The dance of sorrow came. I remember dusky days of sorrowful memories coming back to haunt me. it happened so fast like an
violindustrial artist with her fiddle. Look through the doors of pain you caused let the claws of regrets sink in. Like a half dead mink im trembling.Time of life is running out faster than that anime sailor clock is ticking. Im a big disgrace as much as i am graceful. Again my heart beating faster than that Irish beat. Life's like a cup of tea it takes one action to mess it up!
(please comment)

IF YOU STEAL THIS IM GONNA TRACK YOU DOWN AND SUE YOU!


My soul have been plunged. Happiness abaned me,out in the cold. But sorrow is my ever company. His voice still winds back and forth in my head. My life is poisened with a black abyss of sorrow. You broke my life into pieces. I carry this shadow of regret,it never leaves just like a ghost. My life had faded to grey,so i mind as well get ready for pending sorrow. Hapiness has strayed my life. This is not what i was expecting.

Tell me your thoughts please!

My life fell into pieces,it was just too much now im filled with woe that i can't even cope with. Tear the sorrow out of my life. You denied it all away you said it was a lie. Why did you have to lie, i can never fly to bliss,i miss bliss. I look out the window as i weep at my life I stare at the knife and i get tempted. Im a soul filled with sorrow. Now im so hollow.

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Default Alone - 08-14-2008, 07:41 PM

This is a poem that I wrote as an introduction to an English paper about Loneliness. I made an A on it too. :3
It's called:

Alone

"Do you know what loneliness feels like?
It is the same as falling from the sky,
And slamming into a cold, black abyss.
An ocean that stretches on forever.


But this ocean has no floor.


There are no fish.
There are no boats that skim across it.
There is only

Void.












And you struggle to stay afloat.

You are afraid of drowning.
You are afraid of being alone forever.
But efforts are fruitless and you sink.


And then, there is

Nothing.




Depression consumes you,
Insanity is your master.


Nothing in itself is the absence of all.
But Nothing in the sense of loneliness


Is Pain.


There is Nothing more.

And that is All.
That is what loneliness feels like.
"


So...what do you guys think?


"...
Forever spiraling...
Drifting...
Gently....
Into Sleep....
Eternal...
Never-ending....

Is this the End?
Is it all so Pointless?

The Inevitable is every man's Fate.
This is the End."
--- Spiraling Void : The Depression, by Me.
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Default 08-14-2008, 10:01 PM

^thats a very good poem I liked it!!!


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Default 08-18-2008, 11:48 PM

Spring


Once there was a Fairyland

For just one week.
It was dark there and yet light,

Those clouds warmed us so at night.
Every little princess had a thousand

Hundreds little crowns with ten per leaf.
The nights there are velvet, black but

You still can feel
The air as horses nuzzling

The wind blowing sweet sakura scent.
The green décor come fresh, Never

been trampled still.
Just one week, and then that

Magic Arkansan spring,
When no one's gone to Mexico,

Slowly turns into normal
Spring with clear skies and more flowers

But somewhere thrown aside its zing.


snowy-day~

egg time!
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Post 08-23-2008, 09:12 PM

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^thats a very good poem I liked it!!!
Thanks. :'3 It took me like..an hour to write. D:


"...
Forever spiraling...
Drifting...
Gently....
Into Sleep....
Eternal...
Never-ending....

Is this the End?
Is it all so Pointless?

The Inevitable is every man's Fate.
This is the End."
--- Spiraling Void : The Depression, by Me.
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Default My poem - 09-10-2008, 01:09 AM

Personally, I don't like poetry very much. Cowboy Poetry Week back in Elko ruined it for me. But I still write it sometimes, like this one.
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I watch it fall, crystal clear
From a leaf’s tip, very near

The rain around, though it’s drops many
Cannot compare to this one’s beauty

Slowly each one forms, then plummets
Down, down, down, away from its summit

At long last it crashes, violently to the ground
And I swear, I swear I hear a faint breaking sound

There it joins the rest of its kin
That fell off the same leaf, to create this puddle thin

There on the floor, they join their inferior others
Their small, quick and loveless raindrop brothers

It seems so unfair that these plump, jewel-like things
That meander slowly downward, causing each leaf to sing

Must again be rejoined to the rest of sky’s water
That lacks any rhythm or tempo, its just clamor

These little drops each take their turn
One after the other, in a pattern anyone can learn

And even when the common raindrops have all hit the earth
They continue their dripping, each one a new birth

However, eventually, they too must end
Slower they come, until there are no more to send

Occasionally you’ll see the last of these drops
Clinging desperately to their leaf, until at last it must stop

How sad it is to watch the last shimmering orb fall
The leaf now abandoned until the next rainstorm calls

And when at long last it does, I will sit here and gaze
As each of my droplets briefly takes center stage


I must be a good actor. You actually seem to think I'm interested.
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Default 09-13-2008, 03:33 AM

Sorry to just BUMP this thread after a month but i have a poem....

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We lay in our beds, with blank faces,
Our eyes are red, our cheeks are wet, all we can think about is not the present, nor the past, but the future. each in our lives we all want to say, after somthing big happens we just want to pray 'i don't want to grow up'


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"Our father our lord in heaven, hollow by thy name. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done. On earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day, our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespasses against us. Lead us not into temptation, into thy kingdom come. Amen."

-The lords Prayer

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