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[AwesomeBean]

Here's a random poem:

Colors of my rainbow

My pen is red,
My crayon is blue,
My T-Shirt is yellow,
and so is my shoe.

My orange is orange,
My broccolli is green,
And it's the strangest food,
I've ever seen!

Purple is fine,
White is so plain,
Pink is mine,
And so is the rain...

I the last line is sorta strange, but I couldn't think of anything else...

[Coloured_Dreams]

There once was a bit of rain,
Which caused a lot of pain,
To wildlife and plants,
No matter how much we chant,
Acid rain-the world will never be the same,

I came up with this in about five seconds, I could've come up with something better if I had a bit more time.

[racerchick1]

this pome has alot of meaning to me

~*Open my eyes*~

i wont to open my eyes
but i dont want to find out if this is all a dream

havin him there
thinking he got away from here

then finding out is not true would kill me
then find out that he really didnt get away from her

finding out that all that i know is a lie to me
the life that i had really wasnt the truth
i need to open my eyes to see if this is a dream now!

nicole
3-15-08

here is another one

~*his thought*~

his touch
calms me down when needed
it takes me to a calm place

Makes me feel as if im important to some guy
i feel as if no one can ever hurt me again
i get the shivers becuase of the safness feflt
when i get hugs i never want him to let go
i feel the safness fir that short time

all my pain is taken away from my body
my body gets weak and wants to just fall
i feel as if im free falling through the air
takes my breath away

makes me smile for the rest os the DAY
life seems so simple and peaceful

i want to close my eyes and open them to see if its all a dream
i never want to lose this feeling cause he means so much to me righ now in life!

nicole
3-15-08

[theusedangel]

I wrote this poem for my boyfriend Marshall, I'm thinking of writing it in a card & mailing it to him. but what do you think of it good idea or no on both?

Give me sometime & you'll see, what you mean to me.
Your eyes, your smile, you drive me so wild.
This hope I have for me & you, A love I know so true.
I wanna hold you, love you, touch you.
I was so hurt, but you help me deal, help me heal,
Everyday I pray this is GOD's will.
You hold my heart so becarefull what you do.
& always know, I'm with you.

Whats a good title btw?

[Coloured_Dreams]

I'm no poet; but this is good! ^_^

[theusedangel]

thanks guys! I had a very good friend say that the poem was very sweet & a great idea!

[honeybunny5]

I LIKE THIS POEM CUZ IT'S HILARIOUS!!!! HAHA im already laughing

ok.....

You laugh
I laugh
You cry
I cry
You jump off a cliff
I laugh even harder.......<3

[xTanpop]

Its an ah-mazing poem!!!

To tell you the thruth, who could
come up with a better title for it
than you?! You wrote it after all!
You are the only one who fully understands
what each part of your poem means!
You should come up with the tutle yourself
thats just my opinion!

[catewilliams]

Just a quick reminder that theres already a large thread for submitting poetry.

Skidaddle on over and check it out: http://www.thedollpalace.com/forum/general-discussion/12641-post-stories-poems-here.html

[xTanpop]

no one actually comments on other
people's poems and stuff in that thread.
They just post there own and don't pay attention
to other people. Never liked that thread.