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Default 04-12-2007, 11:19 AM

Immortal
It can be forever therefore it can not be killed.
It can be everlasting therefore it can not be destryoed.
Only those who know can stop it leaveing it to few,
for what can truly last forever is my love for you.


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Default 04-28-2007, 08:18 PM

Fire Emblem: Truth, Love, and Despair

Prologue:

Fifteen years ago, the War Of The Stones ended with a blast of white flashing light. The villainous Demon King had been defeated for the second time. This time, imprisoned in Rausten’s stone, and his body shattered two pieces by the power of two royals, Prince Ephraim and Princess Eirika, along with a manakete, or dragonkin, Myrrh. Helping along their journey to save Prince Lyon, whom the Demon King had control, were many others. The Tempest King, Joshua, had found the love of his live in that war, and it was not his gambling, but a beautiful swordsman named Marisa. She was a bit unsociable, but courageous and willing. The two fell in love shortly after meeting, and decided to joint rule Jehanna, Joshua’s homeland that his mother left for him to rule. They brought along a few generals to Jehanna, those of whom they trusted. One day, one of the general’s started acting a bit eccentric after coming back from Rausten on a mission...

Want to see more? Too bad. =P The story I'm writing so far is 70 pages, so.... I don't think I can post it. It is truely wonderful. Simply genius! (Wow, I am bragging like crazy......) I just really like writing stories. I'll post the start of one of my other ones some other time.



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Default 04-28-2007, 09:06 PM

Nick and I
By: Coleyfelix
dedicated to: My childhood friend, Nick. Too bad your a spoiled brat now.
A/N: This is a very small mini-story that is one of many that will eventually be about me and my old friend, Nick. Maybe i'll post more, later.

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Outside it was warm and sunny and flowers were in full bloom. Spring was here, and as I walked across the street, my hand entwind with Mommy's, I dreamed of having a beautiful purple princess dress. If I had a princess dress I would be beautiful. Without it, I was ugly like a boy color.

I wasn't vain, I just wanted to be pretty for once.

Nick's mommy opened the door like she did every day and we made our way inside. I knew were everything was, it was almost a second home to me. Without taking my shoes off, I walked into the second room, the kitchen. Nick was sucking away at a tootsie roll and scirbling in a Mickey Mouse coloring book with a purple crayon.

I really wanted him to let me use the purple crayon.

"What's your fravorate (that's really how we said it lol) color?" I asked, not taking my eyes off the crayon. Say a boy color, I thought, let me use that crayon.

"Purple," he said, holding up the worn-down crayon.

"But... That's a girl color!" I giggled, trying to snatch it away from him.

"No such thing. I can like any color I want," he said, grabbing the purple away.
For a second I just stood there, taking in what he had just explained. "Yeah, huh," I said, thoughtfully. I pulled up a chair and we sat, charing all the colors of the rainbow.


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Default 04-29-2007, 10:17 PM

cool story, keep posting i found it cool


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Default 05-01-2007, 06:19 AM

Okay, here's the one about my life in Gr. 7/8 It's called, My Life In The Nut House (my friend chose it.)


As the two entered the lunch room, Em stopped in mid-step. “Oh please.” She said in exasperation. “They’re freaking stockers.” She said, her eyes resting on Luke. “Let’s just get to our…” she trailed off. Ryan was seated at their usual table as well as a mutual friend, Carrie, a gross classmate named Cody who had a crush on Carrie, a blond girl named Jessica (a friend of Em’s and enemy of Bailey’s) and her friend Clorissa. On the other side was Ryan, Stan, a girl named Shamika and a shorter guy with brown hair that was often seen with her. Neither Em or Bailey knew his name. To their right was Vern, and to his right was Stefan. To his right were two empty spaces; right across from Ryan.
“Have fun.” Teased Em under her breath.
“Shut it.” Snapped Bailey. Forcing a flirtatious smile, she sat directly across from him. “Hey Ryan. What’s up?” she asked.
“The sky.” He said sarcastically.
Em rolled her eyes. “Oh please. What is this, the nineties?”
“No. It’s 2006. I thought of all people, you would know that, Miss Goody-Two-Shoes-Squared-Rapist-In-A-Can.” Stefan said, jumping into the conversation.
“What the sh*t?” Bailey snapped, slapping him. Glancing at the hand she had slapped him with, she wiped it off on her jeans. “Gross.”
“I’m seriously going to have to think about getting a new table.” Em sighed, opening her lunch bag.
“I agree. All in favour of Em finding a new table, raise their hands.” Ryan put in, raising both of his. Stefan, Vern, Stan, Cody, Shamika and her friend raised their hands.
“Yes?” Mrs. Fish said, coming over.
“Oh, uh, nothing.” Said Ryan quickly, jerking his hand back down. Shamika, Cody, Vern, Stefan, Stan and Shamika’s friend did the same.
Em rolled her eyes again. “Did you see anybody raise their hands, Bailey? Because I could have sworn a bunch of losers did, but you know, they don’t count for anything.”
“Lame come-back.” Ryan said, nodding his head in mock approval.
Em made a rude gesture, and opened a bag of carrots. “Did you bring a magazine? I think I would feel much better if I had a picture of Orlando Bloom to melt over.”
It was Bailey’s turn to roll her eyes. “Please. You do know that there’s no way you’ll ever marry him.”
“A girl can have her dreams.” Em shot back.
Bailey shrugged, biting into her cheese pizza. She glanced at Ryan, who was staring at her. She lowered the pizza. “What?”
Ryan blinked. “Oh. Nothing.”
Em choked back a laugh.
Bailey glared.
Em glanced away, a smile on her lips. She kept eating, her eyes fixed intently on her carrots.
“Are you going to eat that?” Ryan asked, gesturing to Em’s pizza.
“Uh, yeah. Not like you need the fat anyway.” She retorted.
Ryan laughed in spite of himself. “And you think you need it more than I do?”
Em kicked him. “Shut your face, you retard.”
“Ouch. That hurt.”
“Next time I’ll make sure it does more than hurt.” She threatened icily.
“You really hate me, don’t you?”
“When’d you figure that out?” she shot back.
“Touché.” He said.
“I can see I’m wasting my breath.”
“Then why are you still talking?”
Em kicked him again, and ate her pizza quickly before he had the chance to swipe a slice.
“That was mean of you.” Bailey pointed out, glancing down the table. Everyone else was in their own conversations.
“I wouldn’t have said it if it wasn’t true.” Em said.
The lights went off in the lunch room.
“It’s the hallway Nazi.” Em hissed, glancing at the principal.
“Who’s from the nineties now?” hissed Ryan.
Em made a face and turned her eyes back to the principal, who, she thought, was in need of a major makeover. Now, she was definitely living in the nineties.
“You will now be dismissed,” Mrs. Oh said, “this table can go.” She pointed to their table.
Bailey stood. She had been finished for at least ten minutes.
Emiline pulled her down swiftly. Bailey sat on the benches that were connected to the large cafeteria tables. “I’m not done.” She motioned to her last bit of pizza crust.
Bailey stood. “Well, I think they’ll let you consume that on our way out. You’ll be done by then. It only takes five seconds to eat some pizza.”
“For you, maybe.” Em stated, nodding her head in Luke and Ryan’s direction. “I have my juice, too.”
Bailey realized that this wasn’t about just chomping down food. “Oh, come off it. They won’t bite. They’re just guys.” Bailey gazed at Em, who was very slowly eating her crust. “If anyone bites, it’s us.”
“Yeah, I know, but I don’t want to do this.” Em said with a sigh.
“Come on…you know our deal.”
Em looked around the once crowded cafeteria. The only people left were two grade eights, and one other grade seven on the other side of the “seven’s” side. “Fine. But, just to let you know, if something wrong happens, like I end up marrying him, you are so dead.” Em stared at Bailey persistently.
She laughed. “Yeah, I get the point. Now let’s go.”
Stuffing the last of her pizza in her mouth, she stood and followed Bailey. She groaned as she saw Luke and Ryan in the hallway.

That's only the beginning.... MWAH HA HA. (I cut out the very first bit, btw)



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Default 05-01-2007, 06:23 AM

Wow cool poem and stories.



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Default 05-01-2007, 06:25 AM

Please read my story above! =P It's co-written between Miluiel_she_elf (Emiline) and me, (As Bailey)



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Default 05-01-2007, 06:54 AM

Yes i have read it. It is very very very impressive.



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Default 05-01-2007, 11:19 AM

My own pity my deep regret,
all this time that I have spent.

You help make me see,
This person that I don't want to be.


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Default poem with meaning - 05-03-2007, 10:17 PM

this peom is about this guy that treated me like **** wit his noe ea gf when they were goin out
tell me what you think of it please!!??

STILL HAVE FEELINGS
I have feels for you
even after what you
have done to me so many times
I don’t know if I can trust you
with ma heart again
I don’t wont it
to get stopped on by you
who I really trusted before
after all that **** happened
I hide the fact that I still
have feelings for you
from everyone but one person
she doesn’t mind this but will
not be happy if I get hurt by you again
I still have feelings for you
but they are about as
STRONG as before you
stopped all over my heart
and broke it to pieces
I still have feels for you
but im to scared to ask someone
to have you call me
so I can see if you
still have feels for me TOO!


NEVER REGRATE ANYTHING CUZ AT ONE POINT YOU REALLY WANTED IT!!

I LOVE ALL THE PEOPLE THAT HAVE BEEN THERE FOR ME LATELY!!!
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