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Default 04-01-2007, 09:31 PM

You did this to me...
You did this to watch me bleed.
You did this with no regret....
You did this to gain repent.
You did this to me....
now you shall see....
EXACTLY what you've made me to be.


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Default 04-01-2007, 11:42 PM

Ummm... This is a poem I wrote for my BFF when we went to Middle School. I'm not much for poetry, I'm more of a story person.

FRECKLES

You and me,
Best of friends,
Not me without us,
It's always us two.

We walk along across school's grassy field,
bright sunshine upon our freckles,
we wave to others and they all know,
I am not me without you.

Together we lean against a tree,
a tree we are often found under,
we talk of things,
such different things,
but we always agree,
we are best friends.

Me and you,
Always two,
Never apart,
That is, until middle school.

Me and I,
I must make new friends,
And I know you are doing the same,
But things are confusing,
for the first time in a while,
I am thought of as "her" and not "them".


And all that jazz!
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Default 04-04-2007, 07:55 AM

The yellow canvas
There was once a art gallery
Where the paintings earned the artists a high salary
All the bright jazzy canvases earned the most
Which gave them a high reason to boast

After the gallery was locked every night
The abstract paintings would have a fight

I have the best colours the rainbow canvas would say
For they where admired every day
But the green canvas disagreed
He would say I have the best colours in history

But there was one canvas who thought that they where no good
It was yellow canvas who wanted to change everything about him if he could

One day at late afternoon
A school came to choose there art project and noticed the yellow canvas really soon



That looks like another world one of the children said
Definitely said another way better than the one of the red

And so from that day on
The yellow canvases lonely life had gone
Now his a star high on the wall
And proud of being so cool


that was 4rm my art project its s**t


i am mad about thestrals i think they rock.
i also like wolves i think they r the best.
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Default 04-04-2007, 09:08 AM

haha nice I like it. I like how you rymed salary with gallery NICE!!!!!!


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Default A thousand - 04-04-2007, 09:17 AM

Today i walked a thousand miles
Tonight i dream a tousand dreams
Tommorow i be a thousand wishes
Tonight i mend a thousand hearts
Tonight i kiss you a thousand times
Tommorow i stop a thousand things


that was on the top of my head


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Default 04-04-2007, 09:19 AM

hmm I like it. wait no I LOVE it. for one you don't ryme and alot of people think thats like a requirement or something which it isn't. Nice job


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Default 04-04-2007, 10:09 AM

She doesn't rhyme, but she does use alliteration and repetition.


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Hmmm, here's an old poem I wrote quit awhile ago, maybe in 6th or 7th grade. I really don't write poetry much anymore.

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I can see your face through the grimmy window
Yes, it's much clearer now.
Your brilliant eyes aren't mucked with delusional colors


Where will we go?


That blue sky is calling us again,
over the rainbow.
We lost each other there.

Let's forget that rainbow
There are to many birds and singing folk, anyway.

You & me, we will live in black and white.

Oh, let's run from COLORTECH.

Forget color, it's over rated anyway.

Hey!
Don't look back.
I am running.
I am right here.

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Looking up I wonder...
How long 'till I get to the edge?

Oh well, I guess I might just jump.
I'm sorry Mama
And I'm sorry Papa.

The thought makes me want to cry every day.
The sigh makes me want to die, this ****ing day.
Mr. Gaddis

So here I go

One
Two
Three
J-U-M-P

Teacher, is this what you wanted?
I'm sorry if it isn't, but...
I fell my hardest and landed with grace.

Did you know that Mama went to the store, & Papa on the road, & never came back?

They left their Baby in the tree tops



Where are we? What the hell is going on?
The dust has only just begun to form.
Crop circles in the carpet.
Sinking. Feeling.
Spin me 'round again, and rub my eyes.
This can't be happening.

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Default Pain - 04-08-2007, 10:17 AM

Pain is not without love.
Pain takes pride and tests your courage.
I say this now. You would rather feel pain than noting at all.

Pain is not without love. Pain may be feirce, and could decide your death.
But it takes your your love to make it anger. Pain makes you stronger.
You would rather feel pain, than nothing at all.

I have no clue why i made this poem.


Midnightstar is Here! I am a cat from thunderclan leader really and love CHEESECAKE!!!

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Default *Love* - 04-08-2007, 10:50 AM

Heh heres a cute lil poem I wrote hope ya like it!

Love is the first bluebird
Love is the first star at night,
Love is the things we do and say
and the people we cry about.
Love is what makes our breath
Love is what takes it away,
Love is the people we see and touch
that's why I love you so much.

xoxoxoxoxoxox
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Default 04-09-2007, 10:17 PM

I love these both. they actually made me happy for awhile it they reminded me of old times. Nice job both of you


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