Advertise Your TDP Stories

[Silver_Wolf_Kitty]

Due to a large numbers of topics pertaining to people asking other to read your stories, please place them all here. When placing this statement, give a link, a short description of your story, and if you want people to comment and critique your story. All previous topics have been deleted.

Thank you.

[miss0xbrightside]

Hmm...well, I feel a tad awkward, seeing as no one's posted any story advertizements on this here thread, but I thought I'd be the first. I'm new to the site, and wrote this story quickly (and late at night), but I was quite proud of it. How about giving it a look-see?

http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/B...-se-ty-as.html
Blue Eyes (Melissa)

Enter Melissa's thoughts as she reflects on the one that got away and her predictions for the future.

Now, I do realize that there are some references to teen pregnancy and very brief sexual references, but I was sure to make them, as I said, brief. I only used the references when absolutely necessary, and I certainly did not go into any kind of detail.

Thank you muchly in advance for taking the time to read Blue Eyes.

[virtugirl333]

I was wondrng if anybdy was willng to read my story Good As Gone? It's abot a slave gong to fredem durng the Civl War. I only have 2 parts up, but will sombdy plese tell me if it's worth finshng?

~virtugirl333

P.S: Part 1 is Edena, Part 2 is Kesa.

[willyirmycorny]

Please read my story, "Say WHAT??" and comment. Thanks.
http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/v...tory_id=153142

[JadeCatQueen]

You guys are welcomed to read the first part of my story. I'll continue it if someone comments.
http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/v...tory_id=151047

[x3_CH3RRY]

mine too plz
http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/M...-se-ty-as.html
;O I have the whoel 6 parts finsihed, but...i dunno, i refuse to add more until pplz like the first one

[Raane]

http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/v...tory_id=159235

There is the link, for Part One of my story "Under The Covers"

It's about this demon possessed girl, like in the Exorcism of Emily Rose. Please tell your friends about my story, and give it a 1-10. 10 being the best, of course.

I'm only 11 (on my sisters account) so I tried my best for the first part.

[Liveinrock42]

http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/Its-not-that-easy-1-story-dpstr163730-se-ty-as.html
there read my story
and post about it
its about 2 best friends at a party
..........
second chapter will happen soon
tell me what you think
ill read your storys too
send them to my doll page

[NotYourPrincess]

Uhm. There's this thing called punctuation, most people know about it. It's a wonderful thing. You should start using it. Other wise, no one is really gonna want to read the whole thing, just for the fact it's hard to read.

And it's rushed. It also appears to be the first draft. You shoudl always write at least two drafts and then the final one when writing a story. You should correct the first draft. Write a second one, and then get other people to correct the second one.

It was also to short. And I would introduce the characters better. When you write you have to let the characters LEAD YOU through the story, not the other way around.

[rebel_devil_chic]

http://www.thedollpalace.com/story/C...-se-ty-as.html
please!!! I have worked on it for a while so please rate and comment!