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Default ~* Miss TDP Mary Sue - Round Two {Handdrawn} - 08-12-2014, 03:51 PM

Welcome to Round Two of the Miss TDP Mary Sue competition! Anyone can join at any time; it doesn't matter if you didn't enter the first round, you are quite welcome to join this round. Round Two is about "The Mary Sue And Her Rival". You must make a doll portraying your character and her rival, and also complete a drabble describing the Sue and her rival. You can write about a clash between the two, or simply a paragraph detailing how the Sue feels about her rival. Drabbles must be a minimum of one hundred words, but can be more if you wish. This topic is for the Handdrawn entries.

The end date is September 20th, but if you are working on a doll and need extra time, feel free to PM me and ask.


Name: Tahirah Lilliane Jessamene Haviland.
Age: Sixteen.
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Drabble: Tahirah Lilliane Jessamene Haviland frowned, her enviably smooth forehead crumpling like a piece of creamy velvet. Usually, nothing at all caused Tahirah's almost permanent smile to fall from her classically beautiful face, but then, this was a situation that merited it. Of course, this was a familiar situation to the talented Ravenclaw student; sadly, a lot of other students were jealous of Tahirah's perfect looks, delicious curves, long golden tanned legs and perfect magical ability. But this girl, Cho Chang, was worse than all of them! They had clashed before when Cho had tried to steal Tahirah's boyfriend. Of course, she had failed, cuz Tahirah's boyfriend, Harry Potter, was blind to someone as hateful as Cho and loved Tahirah the best, of course.

Tahirah had tried to hold out the hand of friendship to Cho Chang, but had been viciously turned down. Cho was no where near as good looking as Tahirah, and certainly not as talented. In fact, she was on the verge of being thrown out of Ravenclaw house cuz of all the times that Tahirah had shown her up to be not clever enough to be there at all. Cho was also a complete sl*t and had dated several boys in succession. She walked around Hogwarts in various tarty items of clothing, each with a short skirt and low top. Tahirah didn't wish evil on her rival; she would do anything to help Cho and to cure her of her helpless jealousy, but sadly Cho didn't want to know. The beautiful witch cried crystal tears at the thought of the terrible things that would happen to Cho that she was unable to prevent.

Soon, it happened and Cho finally made her move. She challenged Tahirah to a duel in the middle of the Great Hall, ignoring the gentle Tahirah's efforts to make for a more peaceful solution. For Tahirah didn't want to fight, even tho Cho was her rival, and she still wished for the two of them to become friends. But Cho's heart was full of hate and she refused to make peace and instead, sent the Cruciatus Curse flying at Tahirah! The Ravenclaw beauty knew that enough was enough. She could no longer stand to see someone like Cho so consumed with hate. Imagine the damage that such an evil witch could do to others! So with a heavy heart, Tahirah began to fight back.

The fight only lasted about ten minutes as Tahirah was so much more skilled at magic than Cho and soon Cho was defeated and begging for mercy. She was to be expelled from Hogwarts forever, and only Tahirah's wish that this was punishment enough kept Cho from being sent to Azkaban. The fight over, Tahirah went to be comforted by her boyfriend Harry, and sympathised over by everyone else, cuz everyone loved Tahirah.

General Competition Rules.

1. Character. When entering, you need to enter with one character and stay with it the entire time. This means that your doll’s hair and skin colour must remain the same throughout, unless otherwise stated in the round theme.
2. Base. You must use the same base set throughout, so pick one with a variety of poses. This base should also be medium in size for handdrawn dollers (comparable in size to the Cora bases) Dollmaker users should use the shuni style base.
3. Theft. No stealing the work of another. This applies to both handdrawn and dollmaker participants, so do not submit a doll that someone else made or, for handdrawn dollers, mix and match pieces of completed dolls that are not your own. All work should be original and failure to comply will result in disqualification.
4. Props. Props and backgrounds are encouraged, but should not be massive. We will ask too large of entries to reduce their size, so be reasonable.
5. Transparency. We ask that all dolls have transparent background and is a GIF file. If you don’t know how to do this, see the following thread: How to Make Backgrounds Transparent
6. Forbidden. Sexually explicit, nudity or overly bloody dolls are forbidden. Entering one could result in disqualification. Also, animation and glitter is not allowed as it creates an unequal field for those who can't animate.
7. Theme. Every doll should relate to the theme. While we encourage creativity, failure to keep with the theme can get you eliminated automatically that round.
8. Judges. No one is allowed to use friendship or promises to sway a judge’s decision. Threats, bribery, and attempts to interfere or discover the judge’s decisions in anyway will result in disqualification. Arguing with the judges can result in an automatic elimination.
9. Competing. You can only submit one entry for each competition, so choose wisely.
10. Entries. You may enter both competitions if you wish. Make sure, however, that you do not enter the same drabble for both competitions; it must be different.

Each entry must consist of a doll, to represent the Mary Sue, and a filled out character profile/drabble, as in the example. Please choose one fandom (for example, Harry Potter) or crossover, and stick with that throughout the entire competition. I would advise you to not go for an obscure fandom, as doing so will make it difficult for the judges to fully judge your entry. In any case, the Mary Sue will be more powerful if everyone is aware what canon she's destroying. The Sue used in the example is a Sparklypoo Sue but you can use any kind; Gothic, Warrior, Tragic, Vampire etc. Be creative!

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Default 10-03-2014, 12:28 PM

I know the end date of this is severely passed, but I've had my story written for a month now, however I have not had time to doll. So if it's allowed I'm posting my story, and if before this is cut off I have time to finish the doll then I will try to get that in too.

If this has been canceled let me know so I don't waste time!

So, I don't have enemies. Everyone loves me, or is just jealous and wants to be me. So imagine my surprise, just as I was about to leave, when Ponyville was covered with frost yet again. What was this mysterious pony trying to prove? Obviously I was just going to melt the freeze just as easily as I did before. When I did, in mere seconds, the ponies freaked out and wanted to host a Gala, forcing me to wait a week to leave while they took forever to prepare it (back home we had an entire coronation prep done in one morning, slackers). So that night I went to bed and woke up to, you guessed it, another frosty morning. I had to have a council with Twitter Sparkler to make sure these mules weren't in fact in the midst of a normal winter season and just trying to get me to grace them with my presence longer. She assured me it was supposed to be summer in Ponyville, so I sighed and my sister gave me an encouraging happy look, and I melted the frost again. The rest of the day was beautiful, thanks to me, and the donkeys rejoiced. Anna was excited to be dancing in the sunshine again. I asked her why it made her so happy and she admitted that my melting the snow made her remember her tiny wish that I had tropical powers instead. I reminded poor simple Anna that I was merely eradicating cold, not creating heat, and she replied that it still made her giggle. What did I tell you? Simple Anna.

The night grew darker and frost started spreading across the window panes of all Ponyville's homes. Now I was starting to get irritated. Anna reminded me that all I had to do was melt it, and I couldn't help but snap at her. "And then what?! It's coming back every night! What am I to do?! Stay in chronically frozen Hoovesdale the rest of my life?!" No thank you. I will not stand for it. I rushed out into the frosty night.

Eventually I came across a frozen pond with what appeared to be an ice fishing hole. I thought I heard heavy breathing and sure enough there was a mare. Not plain looking in the least, but still nowhere near my beauty. His silver mane whipping in the cool breeze against his knotty wooden staff, and his boyish eyes fixated on my feminine prowess. "It's cold out tonight" he spoke out into the dark. "Yes indeed it is" duh. I clicked my hoof on the ice annoyed. I know he knows who I am. Obviously this cold is an insult. He seemed to pick up on my irritability and smiled sheepishly and commented "I thought you enjoyed the cold, my Ice Queen". Yup, he knows who I am "While it's true the cold never bothered me, I really just want to end this frost and go home". He looked saddened by this news, but smiled and then spoke as he melted away I to the darkness "Well, I can only hope the frost keeps coming back. I would hope your beauty graces us forevermore."

Irritating pompous philly. No. It needs to be warm so I can leave. Just then Anna comes trampling through the thicket. "Oh! There ya are sis" GAH, can't she take a hint? "Hi, Anna." "I know you're sad but we're here until Saturday anyway, so why not make the most of it?" "GAH don't you SEE Anna?! I'm stuck here until it can stay warm! Just, leave me alone" she stood there and bowed her head and kicked at the snow. She mumbled " you wanna build" "NO." And I ran off into the sunrise.

I came upon the frozen beach and I paused short of the icy shoreline. Stupid. Childish. Urgh. Ok, keep it together Elsa. It's sunrise and the ponies are about to whine at a little frost. So I start to melt the snow. Nothing. I try again, still nothing. "See Anna?! Stuck here!" Wait a minute, it's Anna's fault. She's a hard one to love, that's for sure. So now what?! I need to relax...and as I sat there I stared around the icy beach.

If only I had tropical powers. Ice can't accumulate in the tropics. What would one need to have the power of heat? Love overcomes fear, fear is Ice. What's more powerful than love? And then it hit me. Duh, power is more powerful than love. I'm the most powerful being here, so it would appear to even the most ignorant that I should be able to do whatever I want. And so it happened. A burning sensation touched my flank. Startled, I turned to look...a fire emblem engulfing my ice crystal cutie mark! Ok, let's try this, as the power surged through me the ice melted away, first through my hooves, then through my gorgeous plait and finally my icy blue eyes were ablaze. I galloped triumphantly towards town, splashing in the steaming victory puddles all around me. And there he was.

Muzzle dropped wide open, heartache clear in his eyes. "But, my frost!" "...YOUR frost?!" He was clearly struggling with something, and puddles appeared at his hooves. I giggled at his apparent lack of notice that it looks as though he's wetting himself. "But I love you" he whispered. "My frost, it won't stay icy! It's melting on contact with your unbelievable power." I composed myself almost instantly "Yes, it would appear I will not be staying here forevermore, sorry to disappoint." He stood there, sopping wet. Pitiful looking, much like my Anna. "You do adore me, don't you?" He eagerly looked up "Yes, we are both icy hearts and so of course are meant to be!" "And what of now? I'm now ice and fire, not so perfect anymore?" He drooped his head, glanced at my flank and gasped in awe. "You have TWO cutie marks! That's never been done before by power alone! There was once a Cutie Pox epidemic, but you appear to be fine?" "Yes, well. Power tends to overcome all obstacles, so it was only a matter of time before..." "Look! The flame is surrounding the ice, living together as one! Oh my Queen, don't you see? We can be together! I will treasure you always, and you can be forever adored as you should be." I contemplated his words. He was certainly easier to get along with than Anna, not so constantly happy go lucky, and I do love being adored. "Why don't you come with me, back to Arendale?" "I would follow you anywhere, my queen."

And so it was settled. Ponyville was once more frost-free, but they did have to readjust to living in their new tropical region. Apple Fritter and her family learned to love coconuts and especially pineapples, which are tastier than apples anyway, so Ponyville rejoiced ten-fold. Saturday came quickly after that, the party was dull, but at least Frosty-Boy was there to entertain me. As he and I trotted back to the troll kingdom with Anna holding us back while she constantly stopped to smell the roses, I realized I'd not yet asked him his name. "What do I call my most faithful subject?" "Jack Frost, my lady." Perfect.

So you see, even when it seems I have an enemy, it really just turned out to be someone who was so in love with me, they did anything they could to keep me near. You can't blame the poor dear, he was so alone before me.

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Default 10-04-2014, 07:43 AM

Definitely not cancelled; right now, I've decided to just wait for entries.

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