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Miranda_ 06-07-2012 11:57 AM

Miss TDP Mary Sue Round 2 {Handdrawn}
Welcome to Round Two of the Miss TDP Mary Sue competition! Anyone can join at any time; it doesn't matter if you didn't enter the first round, you are quite welcome to join this round. Round Two is about "The Mary Sue And Her Rival". You must make a doll portraying your character and her rival, and also complete a drabble describing the Sue and her rival. You can write about a clash between the two, or simply a paragraph detailing how the Sue feels about her rival. Drabbles must be a minimum of one hundred words, but can be more if you wish.

The end date is July 5th, but if you are working on a doll and need extra time, feel free to PM me and ask.


Base: ..fishbowl designs..

Name: Tahirah Lilliane Jessamene Haviland.
Age: Sixteen.
Fandom: Harry Potter.
Drabble: Tahirah Lilliane Jessamene Haviland frowned, her enviably smooth forehead crumpling like a piece of creamy velvet. Usually, nothing at all caused Tahirah's almost permanent smile to fall from her classically beautiful face, but then, this was a situation that merited it. Of course, this was a familiar situation to the talented Ravenclaw student; sadly, a lot of other students were jealous of Tahirah's perfect looks, delicious curves, long golden tanned legs and perfect magical ability. But this girl, Cho Chang, was worse than all of them! They had clashed before when Cho had tried to steal Tahirah's boyfriend. Of course, she had failed, cuz Tahirah's boyfriend, Harry Potter, was blind to someone as hateful as Cho and loved Tahirah the best, of course.

Tahirah had tried to hold out the hand of friendship to Cho Chang, but had been viciously turned down. Cho was no where near as good looking as Tahirah, and certainly not as talented. In fact, she was on the verge of being thrown out of Ravenclaw house cuz of all the times that Tahirah had shown her up to be not clever enough to be there at all. Cho was also a complete sl*t and had dated several boys in succession. She walked around Hogwarts in various tarty items of clothing, each with a short skirt and low top. Tahirah didn't wish evil on her rival; she would do anything to help Cho and to cure her of her helpless jealousy, but sadly Cho didn't want to know. The beautiful witch cried crystal tears at the thought of the terrible things that would happen to Cho that she was unable to prevent.

General Competition Rules.

1. Character. When entering, you need to enter with one character and stay with it the entire time. This means that your doll’s hair and skin colour must remain the same throughout, unless otherwise stated in the round theme.
2. Base. You must use the same base set throughout, so pick one with a variety of poses. This base should also be medium in size for handdrawn dollers (comparable in size to the Cora bases) Dollmaker users should use the shuni style base.
3. Theft. No stealing the work of another. This applies to both handdrawn and dollmaker participants, so do not submit a doll that someone else made or, for handdrawn dollers, mix and match pieces of completed dolls that are not your own. All work should be original and failure to comply will result in disqualification.
4. Props. Props and backgrounds are encouraged, but should not be massive. We will ask too large of entries to reduce their size, so be reasonable.
5. Transparency. We ask that all dolls have transparent background and is a GIF file. If you don’t know how to do this, see the following thread: How to Make Backgrounds Transparent
6. Forbidden. Sexually explicit, nudity or overly bloody dolls are forbidden. Entering one could result in disqualification. Also, animation and glitter is not allowed as it creates an unequal field for those who can't animate.
7. Theme. Every doll should relate to the theme. While we encourage creativity, failure to keep with the theme can get you eliminated automatically that round.
8. Judges. No one is allowed to use friendship or promises to sway a judge’s decision. Threats, bribery, and attempts to interfere or discover the judge’s decisions in anyway will result in disqualification. Arguing with the judges can result in an automatic elimination.
9. Competing. You can only submit one entry for each competition, so choose wisely.
10. Entries. You may enter both competitions if you wish. Make sure, however, that you do not enter the same profile for both competitions; it must be different.

Each entry must consist of a doll, to represent the Mary Sue, and a filled out character profile/drabble, as in the example. Please choose one fandom (for example, Harry Potter) or crossover, and stick with that throughout the entire competition. I would advise you to not go for an obscure fandom, as doing so will make it difficult for the judges to fully judge your entry. In any case, the Mary Sue will be more powerful if everyone is aware what canon she's destroying. The Sue used in the example is a Sparklypoo Sue but you can use any kind; Gothic, Warrior, Tragic, Vampire etc. Be creative!

belladoggy 07-06-2012 03:52 AM

Just saying that I will enter; I just need to find a versatile and small base set (the current ones I have are way too big)

eros 09-26-2012 05:12 PM

Name: Rochelle Koori the Echdina (Or in the doll's case, human)
Age: 16
Fandom: Sonic the Hedgehog

"I don't want you going alone!," said the red echidna, Knuckles, to his adoring girlfriend.
Rochelle replied," For the last time don't worry! Before I met you I did lots of treasure hunts by myself."

Rochelle thinks back to those long, hard days. When she was younger her town was in dispare. She ventured out to train with the top martial artists in the coldest part of Mobius. She learned how to be stealthy and how to harness the power of ice. While she was about to finish her training, Rochelle heard of hidden treasures and went to find them. She returned home and rebuilt her city. Rochelle is now treated as a loving hero.

"I'm sure one hunt without you won't hurt," exclaimed Rochelle.
Knuckles said,"Nope. Ain't gonna happen."
"Look you need to stay here and guard the Master Emerald. And I promise if anything bad happens, I will call you," replied Rochelle.
Knuckles thought about this. She's not to far off so he could be at her side in no time.
"Well....," Knuckles said slowly.
Rochelle gave him the best "puppy dog" look she could muster.
"I guess you can go. But you have to promise to call me as soon as you get there!" said Knuckles.
Rochelle hugged Knuckles. "You're really sweet, you know that."

Rochelle set out and in no time she made it to her destination. A giant pyramid loomed over her. Rochelle remembered what her boyfriend said and pulled out her communicator.
"Hey Knux, it's Rochelle. I've made it to the pyramid."
She waited a few minutes without a reply.
"Strange...perhaps he's just busy."

She strolled inside casually like any other day. She found a torch and lit it with a match she had. As she was walking along, a familar unpleasant voice stopped her in her tracks.
"Hmpf, look who have here."
A white bat, in a skin tight suit flew down from the ceiling.
"Rouge," replied Rochelle with a sneer,"What are you doing here?"
"Probably the same reason as you," said Rouge. "Except I'm the one going to be taking home the treasure!"
Rochelle said," Don't bet on it."

Rouge and Rochelle began racing down the long hallways, dodging bo.oby traps and whatever came in their way. They turned around a corner and there it was. The treasure sat in idle, waiting to be held.
Rochelle ran towards it, but Rouge flew in front of her and snatched it up.
"Hey!," yelled Rochelle.
"Ha! Too slow!," Rouge said as she began running back towards the entrance.
Rochelle chased after her, using her ice powers as an attempt to freeze her. But since it was so hot in the pyramid, the ice melted long before it could reach Rouge. They were getting near the entrance. Rochelle had to stop Rouge and get that treausure!

Rouge looked behind while she was running and said, "Looks like I'm the one taking home the treasure. And who knows! Maybe Knuckles will be so impressed, that he'll just have to leave you for me! HAHAHA---wow!"
All of a sudden Rouge stepped on a bo.oby trap and her feet shot up in the air. She was entangled by her feet by some rope and was hanging upside down.
Rochelle walked up to her and took the treasure.
"Hey give that back!," whined Rouge.
"You know Rouge, you may have the treasure for a little while, but I will be the one who always ends up with it," said Rochelle as she walked out of the pyramid.
"You're a bat! You should be used to hanging upside down. Get yourself out!," replied Rochelle.

Rochelle headed home to prove to her boyfriend that she did just fine without him. Before she headed to Angel Island she decided to call him up on her communicator. But it still wasn't working quite right. Rochelle got worried and quickened her pace. She finally made it, and ran up the long stairs where the Master Emerald resides. When she reached the top, a red echidna looked up at her from sitting on the ground.
"Rochelle!," exclaimed Knuckles as he started to stand up.
"Knux!," yelled Rochelle. She ran up and tackled him back onto the ground.
Rochelle said," I did it! I got the treasure!"
"Haha good!," said Knuckles.
They both stood up and hugged each other again. But Knuckles pulled away quickly.

"Hey how come you didn't call me?," said the stern Knuckles.
Rochelle replied," I did! Or at least I tried. My commincator wouldn't work."
Knuckles stared her down, to see if you was telling the the truth. He realized she was.
Knuckles said," Maybe we can have Tails check it out."
"Sounds good, but not right now. I'm starving! Let's go eat," exclaimed Rochelle.
"I am a little hungry myself," said Knuckles as he pulled out a portal ring.

He sat the ring on the ground and it enlarged big enough for them to go through.
"So did you have any problems?," asked Knuckles.
Rochelle was stepping towards the portal. "Well I did have a little run in with Rouge, but I'll tell you that later!"
"Wait what happened with Rouge?!," said Knuckles. But Rochelle was already on the other side. So he hopped through to disover what his girlfriend had to say and enjoy a nice dinner with her.

The End...
Base (c) +Mona's+ by ~LILYtam on deviantART
Also the name Koori is Japanese for ice! Just thought I'd throw that out there.
I know the contest was on hold due to lack of participation, but hopefully this will spark some motivation!

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