I took what you said, and updated it a bit (this is why I save mt WIPs; so I can go back and make changes later even after I think I've finished a doll.) I hope you don't mind me using your updated outline as a starting point to smooth out jagged-ness. I tried to reshade it using more "u", "c", "o", and sometimes "y" shapes instead of horizontal lines. I think the top part was better on the other one, but oh well.
Also changed HSV on the base since she was looking sickly against this background in my previous post. Obviously same base