Did you want CC?
I recommend you go through a tutorial, because that will really help. That's how I started! Here are my tutorials: Specialized Tutorials From Hayley
You shaded, but you didn't shade. You recoloured the skin, so it looks like the clothes are painted on. If you follow my tutorial, you will see the proper way to shade. I'd love to see the finished product after using a tutorial. ^_^
What program do you use?