08-12-2013, 05:32 PM
I missed your previous doll and concur with Lovie. It's really good! My only CC is the jeans don't have a waistband? But that's a style preference.
Your novel character is really good as well! Here's my CC:
The cream colour needs more contrast. The green palette has a lot, and the cream has less. When doing a pattern, both colours should have an equal amount of contrast so it blends in better. I would especially darken the cream outline. I think the forum colour works against you, since it's a very similar colour to the cream.
You didn't give loose strands to the hair. It looks fine as is, and you did give your last doll strands, but I thought I'd mention it in case you forgot. ^_^
I love the doll though - you've improved so much!