Well girls, I finally finished writing it! (The rough draft) 30 pages doubled spaced, around 6,000 words, and 10 chapters including a epilogue. I have until the 22nd to finish it, so I'll have plenty of time to revise and such.
Just a quick question, mainly for Lovie. Could I use part of the revisions you made? I don't want to steal the entire pieces you adjusted, but I like the way you used your wording for example:
Like a beacon of hope, it is very precious to Lavender City. It's very surprising Xavaster hasn't cut it down yet.
And I will have to agree that the first few chapters are pretty bad with word usage. I didn't put much thought into them.