08-10-2012, 11:29 PM
Cute base. I agree with Ness's CC, and two more of my own: The bo0bs don't match in each base. In Base One they're perky, Base Two they're squished abnormally close, and Base Three they're much larger than the first two and spread further apart than both as well. My 2nd CC is the feet of the middle base look uncomfortable. I mean, yeah, I can physically stand like that if I forced myself to, but shoes already irk people to draw, and I think this would throw them off. Other than those and Ness's CC I think the lines are perfect and can't wait to see the finished product.
Names, I thought of a Nelly when I saw her face, and my hubs said Rachel.