The Birdkeeper -
06-16-2012, 09:15 PM
This is actually an excerpt from my current book. Planning to have it finished in the summer.
"Stop that Ocarnia! I don't want another novel that has been singed." Esmie warned.
"It's not like I singe things on purpose! Oh yes, I think I shall go out an singe my bed today. That sounds like a fun time to me. Seriously, I am a fire Berson! I can't HELP it!" I retorted angrily.
"That is why I had Nara come here to keep your flames under control. But no. You just HAD to go and burn WATER! Riddle's sake. I don't know how you managed to burn water."
"Hmm. You do have a point. I didn't think water could be burned."
"But it did."
"I don't care!-
Can't go further than that.
I would love to here what you thought.