03-14-2012, 09:47 AM
For a beginner, you're really good. Like, REALLY good. The braid looks fine, actually. It's the highlights on her bangs that look kind of fake...try adding in strands. The pattern on the first dress looks very cool, but the outline is a little odd. The second dress also looks good, but it's a bit pillowy. The best part of that dress is that you shaded the trim. Try adding in folds across her abdomen so you can shade it differently.