09-17-2010, 10:01 PM
I'm no expert but Good 1st attempt, I like it (you should see my 1st handrawn doll)I like the shape of the dress it fits the base ncely and most of the creases are in the right place, I dont know where you got the colour pallete or if you made it yourself but it looks very flat and it needs stronger highlights, lowlights and most of all depth. Search for good colour palletes as they will really make a big difference in your handrawing.
The hair idea is is really good and you got the shape fairly right but the highlights in the fringe go too far across the head and the the pallette is wrong it needs depth...Some cute little shoes would have been good too.
Well done for your 1st go!