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Default 08-01-2010, 04:52 PM

Ooc: Better, but your paragraph needs to change to reflect her personality. Show that she's lazy and selfish; maybe she stands in the way of people walking down the street so that they're forced to navigate around her while she's doing her animal rights bit, and that's why she gets trodden on?


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