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Default 07-28-2010, 02:07 PM

Your plot is far too small. You need three large paragraphs, as I already explained to you, to pass muster. Here's one of my RPs as another example: Street Fighter {RP} See the difference? You also have no character of your own, and no intro paragraph. You have to have those before starting.

I will give you a chance to edit your first post so it fits the rules, but if you don't edit by tomorrow, or if you do and the edits are not enough to pass the RP, it will be locked. It wouldn't be fair on everyone else if I just let yours pass when it doesn't fit the rules I laid out.


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