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Default 07-27-2010, 08:00 AM

You're getting better =)

First doll: The hair is excellent, but do you see the way you have two lines of highlight starting in the center and running down to the ends? Those shouldn't be so seperate; she should mingle and trample off. There should also be a sort of ring of highlight on the hair; running through the middle, as though someone put a small hoop on her head, and it sort of sank into the hair and isen't visible around the forehead.

If that makes any sense at all. XD

Second doll: The heel should be starting at the heel, and then pointing down towards the bottom left of the image. Try it and see. =P

Also, the middle bit, between the crotch and the bewbs is awesomely shaded :O

And I hate streaks too. XD


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