10-06-2009, 06:52 AM
That's a lot better; I can see that you're working hard on your dolls and using the tuts. ^^ A couple of things tho; firstly, the hair needs to be stranded more rather than cut off in blocks. If you look at your own hair, you'll see that it doesn't end like that. Plus, a few loose strands here and there will make it look more realistic by far. Second, the dress still looks a little pillowy, but the folds are definitely an improvement on your earlier dolls. Finally, you forgot base credit. I know it's a bore to remember it, but the best thing to do is save the link in notepad before you start working on your doll so you can just add it in before you post the finished doll.