[LancasterPrincess]

Aw cute, I adore mermaids! C:

Let's see, I see you attempted some highlights! The back part of her hair has a good beginning, but I think what would really help is having more colors to play around with. Have you seen the Pallettes thread in the Doll Creation area? I've got a favorite site for Patterns and Pallettes and I found it through that thread. The website is called Sparkling Ice and it's really good! You can find the Pallettes and Patterns in the Tutorials section, I think having some pre-picked color schemes could help you out a lot! Good Luck and keep working outside your comfort zone!