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Default 09-26-2009, 09:54 PM

Okayokay fine >_> I'll give you CC seeing as you want it.
On the first one, the hair looks sorta like flames; you should have it shaded more vividly so you can tell the difference.
You could've added darker makeup? Just so it goes along with the hair, and perhaps give a few AA's with the hair and the skin tone.

The second one's pretty good but I don't like the hair outline; it's not... round? enough.

Plus most hair is fuller than that, unless it's the type of hair that I think it is - slided, then you just add a few strands that go longer. XD like, two pixel strand that goes longer.

And the cloth on the second one is shaded weird.

There, there you go D:<
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