09-07-2009, 04:51 PM
Other than the white palettes being off, I have two bits of CC. One has to do a little with the palettes, but the base has a fairly dark outline, so the palettes should have slightly darker outlines to match, so it all blends nicely together. Secondly, the lips are REALLY light, and difficult to see. It would have been better if the palette used for the lips was a tiny bit darker, with possibly more contrast.
Oh, also, a couple little things that aren't necessary, but may make things better: I don't see any shadows under the hair, that'd be great. Also, some loose hair strands would make the hair look more natural. Finally, the orange part still does look a little chunky. Are you using the exact same hair, except different colour sometimes?
I do like it though, of course. ^^ You never comment on my dolls... XD