stargazer, it has nothing to do with what the roleplay is based on. Your character is Sue-ish. Like Miranda said, read the stickies to learn what a developed character is. "Vunerable, easily trusting, lives in her own fantasy world"... those aren't good weaknesses. 'Trust' is generally a good thing, as is having a 'soft heart' and 'creativity'. Putting it in that light makes it all seem like good things, not bad.
Stubborn, sloppy, grumpy, etc. Those are flaws. Perfect people don't exist in the real world, so why should perfect characters?
Look over your character and fix it in order to fit the rules, that's all we're asking. Nobody likes a Sue. - If you don't know what that is, look *here*
. And take *this test*
if you aren't sure whether you're character's a Sue or not.