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05-24-2009, 06:39 PM
That's not really a weakness; she needs to have physical weaknesses, like she's not strong, or she's clumsy or gets carpal tunnel a lot from various things. She needs mental weaknesses too; 'she wants to please everybody' is a little too Sueish.
Far, far beyond the island, we dwelt in shades of twilight, through dread and weary days, through grief and endless pain. It lies unknown, the land of mine! A hidden gate to save us from the shadow fall. The lord of water spoke in the silence words of wisdom. I've seen the end of all: Be aware, the storm gets closer.
Blind Guardian
Av by Miranda_
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