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05-24-2009, 06:39 PM
That's not really a weakness; she needs to have physical weaknesses, like she's not strong, or she's clumsy or gets carpal tunnel a lot from various things. She needs mental weaknesses too; 'she wants to please everybody' is a little too Sueish.
I KNOW THE PIECES FIT, CAUSE I WATCHED THEM FALL AWAY, MILDEWED AND SMOLDERING.
FUNDAMENTAL DIFFERING, PURE INTENTION JUXTAPOSED WILL SET TWO LOVERS' SOULS IN MOTION.
DISINTEGRATING AS IT GOES, TESTING OUR COMMNICATION.
THE LIGHT THAT FUELED OUR FIRE THEN HAS BURNED A HOLE BETWEEN US SO WE CANNOT SEE TO REACH AN END...
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