[antimaie]

It's definitly good for a first ^^

CC: Your palattes need more contrast, cause you can't see the shading, and it looks like one block of color.
Your plates should go like this:
> > > > >
except black palattes dont go from black to white, cause they have tints >.<

I found a really good tutorial on hair, hope it helps:

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I hope I helped