12-30-2008, 01:40 PM
The hair is quite good! :) About that dress, you should have shaded it more, instead of leaving it plain blank. it's quite easy, just scribble on a slightly lighter colour that the background, then fill in any areas that you didn't scribble over, then do it again a few times. Try to make the lightest colours closest to whatever direction on the picture you think the light source is coming from.
I mean a weapon you hold. You have a gun, Tanith has a sword... I want a stick. ~ Valkyrie Cain
Ill buy you a stick for Christmas. - Skulduggery Pleasant