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Default 11-22-2008, 08:34 AM

It's quite good for a beginner, nice to see that you're already attempting to shade. However, the hair is a bit pillowy and the clothes look like you just followed the base shading exactly - not a good thing to do. Also, don't make the hair end in a straight line, it looks very unrealistic. But as I said, it's a good start, and with practice you will improve. Most dollers have made these mistakes in the beginning. Try to read some tutorials also; there are some on this site in the Tutorials forum.


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