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Default Alone - 08-14-2008, 06:41 PM

This is a poem that I wrote as an introduction to an English paper about Loneliness. I made an A on it too. :3
It's called:


"Do you know what loneliness feels like?
It is the same as falling from the sky,
And slamming into a cold, black abyss.
An ocean that stretches on forever.

But this ocean has no floor.

There are no fish.
There are no boats that skim across it.
There is only


And you struggle to stay afloat.

You are afraid of drowning.
You are afraid of being alone forever.
But efforts are fruitless and you sink.

And then, there is


Depression consumes you,
Insanity is your master.

Nothing in itself is the absence of all.
But Nothing in the sense of loneliness

Is Pain.

There is Nothing more.

And that is All.
That is what loneliness feels like.

So...what do you guys think?

I'm still here, I just don't post AS OFTEN.

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