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Default 07-30-2008, 11:51 PM

It's really good. ^^ I think the style for the top is a little odd, but the way the base is shaped in the midsection is what's really to blame. However, I'm already seeing improvement and I'm real glad you're USING the tut and not copying like some people do. Which gets annoying. XD

Only problem: the jean shorts shouldn't be drawn to the base. The shading on them is fine, it's just the shape. Short should have a little bit of space between the leg and the fabric of it (see the shorts I dolled in sig.)

Also, other then the hair palette, all the palettes should have more contrast. Contrast is a good thing!

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