06-23-2008, 03:37 PM
The way the blue dress goes completely straight at the hip and then down from there is a tad odd.It's also a bit to straight at the very bottom.
For the first one, the bottom of the hair looks a bit scratchy and the width of the strands are not equal to the top. When they are, it looks more consistant. Also, underneath the hair there should be shadow. You can get away with it on small dolls (though I never do anyway), but with larger portrait ones, it's more obvious.
These are only suggestions, keep in mind. I'm still a newb at this (at least I feel like one).