11-22-2007, 01:19 PM
I love it! It's pretty. You're doing so much better!
However, the one thing with watermelon bubblegun is those folds at the knee. They're exagerated more then you should. I'm not blaming you, but the tut.
I like the hair. It looks windblown. XD
One last CC thing. Where the shirt matches the jeans, it just stops RIGHT on the line. I'd make it look longer or make it appear tucked in because most shirts don't line up exactly with the waist band on jeans.