11-12-2007, 09:45 PM
Your shading overall is very good. When you get nit picky, I'd say the second darkest colour was used too much on the right side. Its best to outline the sides of the shirt, overlapping a little with each line end, then to follow that basic idea throughout it. You want to do that all the while keeping with the lines going horizontally too. For the upper half, above her chest, you want to use a tiny dark line with your second or third darkest colour and shade along that too, but that takes a lot of playing with to get just right. For a doll that size too, a range of 6-7 colours is better for that. It gives it a much softer look.